Fic: The Square Root of Four [SJM RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: The Square Root of Four
Fandom: Super Junior M RPS
Pairing: Sungmin/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG13
Summary: The secret’s out, everything’s broken, but love is worth fighting for.
Notes: Crossdressing!Sungmin. Counting Backwards, final part. Sequel to Two Plus Two Equals Five.

The Square Root of Four
You cheated on me. You fucking bitch.Sungmin

Comments

[mylonelysmile]

"He can adapt, after all.
He’s adapted his whole life, his whole career. He can be anything anyone
wants him to be, and he can do it so well he doesn’t always know where
his own truth lies."
start bawling coz sometimes this is what i feel about Sungmin

“Did she always
have a name and you never told me? Why didn’t you tell me? I always
thought-I thought she was you. You were her. I thought that was the
point. I didn’t want some girl. I can get a girl. The point was-it was...”
continue coz Hyukjae, gahh, Hyukjae wants you T.T not her. . .

“But you don’t want me, do you? Even after all this. Everything I went
through.”
bursting into more tears

“No.” Hyukjae looks wild. “I mean, yes. But not any more. Don’t you see?”
oh Hyukkie. . .

and the whole series is perfect and so much emotion
and so many detail that i cant just

you are amazing and i love this series
<3<3<3

[glitterburn]

Thank you, I'm so happy you liked it :) Oh, Sungmin gives me so many feelings, he's so beautiful and amazing, it was so nice to share those feelings in this series <3

[dandanfung]

I am a terrible reader. So I started reading this piece first, got to the second or so paragraph, and decided that there is no way I can continue without going /back/ to the earlier chapters

[glitterburn]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment :D Wow, you read the whole series through at once! Actually I'm really glad you liked the secondary characters so much - with all the angst going on between Hyukjae and Sungmin, there needed to be a balance. I think Donghae came out of this as my personal favourite, even though he wasn't on my bias list until recently. And you're so right about Ryeowook, he's hardly in there but he's like an emphasis. Honestly I'm delighted you liked them so much and that they *could* overshadow Hyukjae and Min for you despite all the drama going on.

Thank you again :)

[garuneto]

You know what I liked more about this fanfic? That you captured Sungmin's mysterious-ness (am I making up words? lol sorry). I've always though Min's such an unpredictable person full of mysteries cause he's so quiet and this fanfic expressed that and even explain why he's acting that way (even though is fiction, I know lol~)
This is so perfect in so many ways, I mean, not just this charapter but all the series. I fell so in love with this story that its actually my favorite Super Junior fanfiction kekeke.
Ah, I don't know what else to say, sorry for the crappy comment and thank you for writing this amazing story.

[glitterburn]

I know what you mean! Sungmin does have that mysterious quality, doesn't he - sometimes he looks so untouchable and yet it also makes him vulnerable. You never know what he's thinking, he's so good at hiding his emotions or he hides behind the aegyo image. I'm glad these fics could explore that aspect of his personality a bit. Thank you, I'm so happy you enjoyed them ^^

[localised]

YOU FINISHED IT! Yes!!!

I actually sighed out loud by the end of this, it was so emotionally satisfying without taking any easy ways out, and I love that you had Hyukjae acknowledge that it might not be smooth sailing from that point on. I love how natural your dialogue is, and how you always manage to reveal so much w/o resorting to overwrought exposition. Your language is always so lovely + a pleasure to read

... but really I'm just glad they FINALLY TALKED IT OUT because really, I was ready to give Hyukjae a what-are-you-thinking kick in the shins in the last installment. Seriously, these thick-headed boys. Also was it inappropriate that I laughed when Sihae cut through the emotionally charged moment? Because ... omg, so awkward. So funny. I saw you mention a SiHae tie-in/sequel and I'm excited to read that!

Seriously, this series was amazing. Thank you, I'm so glad I read this *____*

[glitterburn]

Thank you so much ^^ I was literally going around in circles trying not to take the easy way out and trying not to overload it. Sometimes I have a terrible habit of over-writing and then cutting back too much, so it's good to know this series hit the mark. Though now I kinda want to write something wildly overwrought and expositional!

Ha, not inappropriate at all! SiHae's interruption was intended as a bit of light relief. And Donghae has no boundaries anyway; he was probably listening at the door the whole time and Siwon was frowning at him in a particularly intense fashion.

Thank you <3

[dianebelieves]

OH.
MY.
GOD.

I am physically and emotionally drained after this. I was so worried that things wouldn't work out and I was so worried that Hyukkie's tantrum would destroy everything.

I cried and I really want to take both of them into an embrace and comfort them.

And bite them and smell their necks.

Ahem,

You nailed it with this one!!!! Awesome job

Di

[glitterburn]

LOL I wanted to put them in a bag and shake them! Thank you for reading :D Hope you're well!!

[dianebelieves]

LMAO - I like that - yes doin' okay - been up since 4 a.m. writing to you - it'll be along shortly ;) Miss you - virtually of course, but I hope you get what I mean