I'll tell you what it is--it's catching!
thelovemafia brought this up in a post and the idea has plagued me ever since. So I pretty much just sat down tonight and wrote the damn thing and it's so long! I haven't written a fanfic this long since...since...I don't know when, but why is this so long? Anyway, you know who to blame this insanity on...
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AND I THOUGHT THEY WERE PERFECTLY IC!!! AHHH!!! SO MUCH OF THIS FIC IS WIN/LOVE!!! The garden sex, the mechy/techy phraseology, the 4827 mention...JUST....AHHH!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD, THIS COULD NOT HAVE COME AT A BETTER TIME! ajdlfkjdf, HOMG YES, Spanner/Shouichi!!!!! OOOOHHHH they need more love...together...Okay, yeah I'm just really happy right now...even if the ending was kinda like 'OH NO YOU DIDN'T, Spanner!' XDDD
Yeah, I can't type anymore.
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GARDEN SEX IS JUST AWESOME! I had to think really hard about where to stage that, actually, so it wasn't stupid like, you know, a broom closet or something...4827 IS SO CANON AND NOW 4851 IS KINDA CANON TOO so I couldn't help referencing the other. Plus I liked writing Shou-chan getting pissed off, so that was really all the point there was to that XDDD
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I totally thought 4851 (or Spanichi like dame_bastie said XDD) would catch on after that one chapter before the 4827 fighting, but it DIDN'T and I was all, 'LOLZ, I'm just perverted...' But haha, thank god for the random postage and your laspe of madness and...GAH!!!
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Well, Spanner had only been around for one chapter then. But after the 4827 explosion, I think we all pretty much know the capabilities of Spanner to be in sex fics. I might have to write more of this pairing at some point...
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Yes I think that they’re definitely IC (and even if they aren’t I liked you version of them a lot)
lol I really liked the way Spanner was portrayed by your story I can’t wait to see more stuff from you~
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Thank you very much for reading!
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I am so glad Spanner turned up in the manga, if only to see what you could do with him! *smiles*
Thank you for writing about that robotics competition! ♥ Since I read the line I've wanted to see how this could have been like, and your version was wonderful. I loved this part best:
It turns out he doesn’t have to. Science is a universal language, and one that Shouichi speaks best.
And of course, the mention of British!Spanner. *grin* Who knew how to speak Japanese at that age!
Shouichi found himself blushing at the boy’s enthusiasm. “I suppose so.” It felt so wonderful to be able to talk to someone who understood what it meant to build and create, who could appreciate his work and didn’t just think “nerd” or “geek” whenever he opened his mouth. “But yours was also impressive, Spanner-san, much more so than mine.”LOVED THIS. ♥ The mutual respect and admiration is a lovely touch - as, of course, is the Geek Love ( ... )
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I hear the Brits breed fanboys to start at an early age *grins* No, I really don't know. I just figured it was more IC for Spanner to know Japanese than for Shouichi to know English...
I just read translations for this chapter on mangahelpers.com and when Tsuna is talking, Spanner says something that sounds like he thinks more than one person is talking to him. Schizophrenic, perhaps? But definitely crazy XD
Originally I thought that Tsuna would be in a Mosca somewhere watching this unfold (in the same vein of SMUT), the young voyeur that he is XD *laughs* I almost wrote that in, but I'm glad now that I didn't. The story works better the way it is.
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You know you want to ;) XD
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I like 4827 and 10051. I've written both on a few occasions; more 10051 than 4827, but they're both really cool, aren't they? As well as remarkably canon ;)
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