Whoa. So fast. I gave you the prompt last night and you've done it this morning. PLACE HOLDER. I'm on public transportation and don't want to be seen giggling madly by the guy next to me. XD
*laughs* I'm a speed-demon, what can I say? (actually I had already started working on something and then I got the prompt and I was like "HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEY! (Squalo moment XD) I can work that in!") Yeah, you wouldn't want that random guy to think you were crazy or anything, right? XD It's not really a giggle story, though, sorry...
All About The Crumbling WorldarisueseiMay 18 2008, 10:14:01 UTC
Apoligize in advance for capslock abuse. cerepan and nymous-fic's bad habit is contagious. SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG. I don't want giving half-assed comment since you wrote this fic beautifully so you deserve the best.
One of your strong points on writing is describing situation and place. I LOVE ALL YOUR TAKE ON DESCRIBING DINO - HIBIRD EXCHANGES. SO CUTE AND AND IF I WERE AN ILUSTRATOR, I'D BE DIE HAPPILY DRAWING ILUSTRATION OUT OF THIS. GAAAAAAAAH ~~~
My fave scenes of course these two : “I guess its goodbye to you too, huh?” said Dino, reaching up to take Hibird gently in his hands. “Will you give something to Kyouya for me?”
Hibird bounced up and down on his palms, eager to do anything for its master. Smiling sadly, Dino bent and kissed to top of its feathery head gently.
“Give that to Kyouya,” he said softly. “With my love.”
and
In response, Hibird flitted to his face, pressing itself gently against his mouth, its feathers still warm with Dino’s Apollonian heat. Hibari’s eyes widened in shock, clearly caught off guard by this sudden
( ... )
OF COURSE I COMPARED DINO TO APOLLO ON PURPOSE! Although I think maybe I got that idea from something cerepan said, because now that I think about it I remember reading something like that in one of her fics...And my sister returned the Percy Jackson series to the library before I could read any more than the first book! (Now I need to go check them back out, I guess
( ... )
Re: CAN THIS ICON BE ANY MORE APPROPRIATE?glasssubwayMay 8 2008, 03:00:20 UTC
Fate works in mysterious ways, yo ;D
I so wanted to work in your idea of artist-Hibird, but I really just couldn't find any way to make it work. So it became the Messenger of LUUUUUUUURVE!
P.P.S. Like, holy snicker doodles! Just when I was losing interest there is a MASSIVE PLOT TWIST! Still want Suigetsu, though...
IS THAT A SQUALO ICON???!glasssubwayMay 8 2008, 03:54:52 UTC
Probably
Uh...Suigetsu was stuck with the others because Itachi was like "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE...who goes on from this point" so while Sasuke was off battling Itachi Kisame was babysitting the rest of Hebi and Suigetsu was like "Hey, why don't I take this opportunity to kick your ass?" And that's the last anybody's seen of Suigetsu.
There was a really good one I saw a long time ago but I can't remember who made it; I saved it to my computer so I can email it to you if you want. But uh...fluffy? This story? Well, Hibird I guess... Of course we can be friends! (BTW I know this is off topic but didn't you write a Squalo/Bel fic recently? I think I saw it and meant to go back and read it and never did because of essays of doom or something...)
Comments 59
PLACE HOLDER. I'm on public transportation and don't want to be seen giggling madly by the guy next to me. XD
Reply
Yeah, you wouldn't want that random guy to think you were crazy or anything, right? XD It's not really a giggle story, though, sorry...
Reply
Apoligize in advance for capslock abuse. cerepan and nymous-fic's bad habit is contagious.
SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG. I don't want giving half-assed comment since you wrote this fic beautifully so you deserve the best.
One of your strong points on writing is describing situation and place. I LOVE ALL YOUR TAKE ON DESCRIBING DINO - HIBIRD EXCHANGES. SO CUTE AND AND IF I WERE AN ILUSTRATOR, I'D BE DIE HAPPILY DRAWING ILUSTRATION OUT OF THIS. GAAAAAAAAH ~~~
My fave scenes of course these two :
“I guess its goodbye to you too, huh?” said Dino, reaching up to take Hibird gently in his hands. “Will you give something to Kyouya for me?”
Hibird bounced up and down on his palms, eager to do anything for its master. Smiling sadly, Dino bent and kissed to top of its feathery head gently.
“Give that to Kyouya,” he said softly. “With my love.”
and
In response, Hibird flitted to his face, pressing itself gently against his mouth, its feathers still warm with Dino’s Apollonian heat. Hibari’s eyes widened in shock, clearly caught off guard by this sudden ( ... )
Reply
I miss cerepan. I hope she comes back soon...
OF COURSE I COMPARED DINO TO APOLLO ON PURPOSE! Although I think maybe I got that idea from something cerepan said, because now that I think about it I remember reading something like that in one of her fics...And my sister returned the Percy Jackson series to the library before I could read any more than the first book! (Now I need to go check them back out, I guess ( ... )
Reply
I love this so much. See, you couldn't just limit Hibird's role to poetry and rap - you made it become the Messenger of Kisses. So fuckin' cute!
So cute and so sad. And I love it.
P.S. - I read the Naruto spoilers too. And OMG. <3 <3
Reply
I so wanted to work in your idea of artist-Hibird, but I really just couldn't find any way to make it work. So it became the Messenger of LUUUUUUUURVE!
P.P.S. Like, holy snicker doodles! Just when I was losing interest there is a MASSIVE PLOT TWIST! Still want Suigetsu, though...
Reply
I don't remember what happened to Suigetsu. XD
Reply
Uh...Suigetsu was stuck with the others because Itachi was like "THERE CAN BE ONLY ONE...who goes on from this point" so while Sasuke was off battling Itachi Kisame was babysitting the rest of Hebi and Suigetsu was like "Hey, why don't I take this opportunity to kick your ass?" And that's the last anybody's seen of Suigetsu.
Reply
Reply
But uh...fluffy? This story? Well, Hibird I guess...
Of course we can be friends!
(BTW I know this is off topic but didn't you write a Squalo/Bel fic recently? I think I saw it and meant to go back and read it and never did because of essays of doom or something...)
Reply
(Yes, I did, but it was um, purely crack and made for a friend. xD;)
Reply
(That doesn't mean I can't read it, right? Crack is fun sometimes...haven't you seen some of the crack I've written? Talk about some crack, now...XD)
Reply
Reply
Reply
S-sweet. DDD:
Hibari can't seem to suck any more than he does in this fic.
But in a good way?
SDKJNDFKBDFKB
ILU
Reply
But it's IC, right?
Reply
TOTALLY IC ARE YOU KIDDING ME.
You're awesome ♥
Reply
Leave a comment