UWAHHH, so bittersweet. >< WTF OMG, after when Hibari told Dino that he was the next target, I was like lkdjaglksdfa T^T. And then AFTERWARDS What had he expected anyway? Confessions of love? Hot wild last-time-we-meet sex? Desperate passion and romance born of a crumbling world that threatened to drop beneath their feet at any given moment? AHHHHH THEN DINO KISSES HIBIRD AND HIBIRD BRUSHES AGAINST HIBARI AND HIS HEART RACES AND OMG. Indirect kiss. T^T yes just T^T
*I'm kind of curious about the 1970s porn* The last part was so cute =) Though it looked funny in my mind when Hibird kissed Kyouya-kun with its beak, haha. Sometimes it seems that the boy never stops to wonder what he's missing out on, even in TYL =/
Oh, okay, that. Um...well, at the time I was listening to a Rufus Wainwright song called Gay Messiah, and the opening lines are: "He will then be reborn From 1970s porn Wearing tube socks with style And such an innocent smile" And I was like "I wonder..." so I contacted a friend of mine who is knowledgable about things like this and he told me that back in the 70s there was this amazing revolution in the pornography industry and things were really dirty and really elaborate...such I decided to use it. It kind of fit, anyway...
Actually, when I visualize that scene, I just imagine Hibird smacking its head right into Hibari's mouth like a feathery tennis ball. But uh...the beak is much less stupid...XD Hibari-kun can be a really dense person sometimes, can't he?
OKAY--uh, wow. when i finished reading this i was totally wondering if it was intended to be happy or sad. XD! so yes, i suppose bittersweet is a good description.
i totally love the interaction between Dino and Hibird, and especially the part where Dino says--“Just me? Only me?” OMG THE FANGIRL IN ME EXPLODED. that was so sweet. i thought it was really sweet. XD
and Kyouya covered in blood = <3; gah, MILLEFIORE! -gnashes teeth- they make good angst but it frustrates me sooo how they come between my beloved D18. ;_; and somehow someone always dies when Millefiore is around
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Like, IDK. It started out happy in my head and then I finished and looked back over and it and IT TOTALLY WASN'T WHAT I INTENDED TO WRITE.
I'm kind of pleased with it, actually, so I'm glad you liked it, even though it's rather sad. Does Hibari love Dino? Will they be reunited? Eh...not the way I write, but people can dream XD!
haha! aww. well it's okay, i can't write anything happy either. XD;
sad things are like my drug. i know it's not good for me but i want it. I WANT ITT. >: IN RESPONSE TO YOUR QUESTIONS: YES! YES! AND DINO CAN SWEEP KYOUYA OFF HIS FEET AND RIDE AWAY INTO THE SUNSET. 8D;
Oh, this was just gorgeous. There's been a lovely flow of d18 coming about because of our lovely Hibarin's birthday, but this has to be my favorite thus far. No, it didn't end in love and happiness, flowers and rainbows, and I'm pretty sure my heart hurts, and my eyes are little damp. But that's a sign of good writing! It was the perfect kind of bittersweet, that leaves you with a little hurt and maybe a pinch of hope. And it also makes me want to resolve the drama in my WIP. So thank you for that as well! Beautiful job.
Why, thank you! I just cannot imagine D18 being a happy pairing, Hibari seems to self-destructive and Dino too patient? kind? Hibari doesn't really deserve him, I think, though I love both characters and I just see their relationship as incredibly dysfunctional and yet still so beautiful and I'm ranting, aren't I? Glad you liked it!
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"He will then be reborn
From 1970s porn
Wearing tube socks with style
And such an innocent smile"
And I was like "I wonder..." so I contacted a friend of mine who is knowledgable about things like this and he told me that back in the 70s there was this amazing revolution in the pornography industry and things were really dirty and really elaborate...such I decided to use it. It kind of fit, anyway...
Actually, when I visualize that scene, I just imagine Hibird smacking its head right into Hibari's mouth like a feathery tennis ball. But uh...the beak is much less stupid...XD
Hibari-kun can be a really dense person sometimes, can't he?
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adkgjadlg okay so this is great <3
i will give you a proper comment later.
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i totally love the interaction between Dino and Hibird, and especially the part where Dino says--“Just me? Only me?” OMG THE FANGIRL IN ME EXPLODED. that was so sweet. i thought it was really sweet. XD
and Kyouya covered in blood = <3; gah, MILLEFIORE! -gnashes teeth- they make good angst but it frustrates me sooo how they come between my beloved D18. ;_; and somehow someone always dies when Millefiore is around ( ... )
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I'm kind of pleased with it, actually, so I'm glad you liked it, even though it's rather sad. Does Hibari love Dino? Will they be reunited? Eh...not the way I write, but people can dream XD!
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sad things are like my drug. i know it's not good for me but i want it. I WANT ITT. >:
IN RESPONSE TO YOUR QUESTIONS: YES! YES! AND DINO CAN SWEEP KYOUYA OFF HIS FEET AND RIDE AWAY INTO THE SUNSET. 8D;
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sequel please!
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Glad you liked it!
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