Comments | gertalia_santa: [fic] for Midori

chromatic_coma in gertalia_santa

[fic] for Midori_Lover!

Dec 20, 2010 17:52

Name of Recipient: midori_lover
Type of Gift: Fanfiction
Rating: PG-13/T
Title: Taboo
Summary: Ludwig's heart palpitates unnaturally every time Mr. Vargas' tongue darts out to lick those luscious lips of his. But no, it's not possible for him to be falling for his teacher... is it?
Author Notes: I hope you enjoy this, midori_lover!

( Sprawled on the floor, with papers fallen all around them, are the most perfect pair of legs Ludwig has ever been blessed enough to see in his entire life. )

Comments 37

animedutchess December 21 2010, 14:55:24 UTC

Uwaaaai~

How sweet and cute! I'm not really into these kind of stories, but I think you wrote it in such a way that makes it really sweet and perfect, and not creepy at all - it's just honest love. I really hope you feel proud about writing this, because you deserve it, and the person you wrote it for is soooo lucky~<3

chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 18:11:16 UTC

*blushblushblush* Oh wow, thank you. I'm glad that you gave it a chance, even though the premise is a bit of a turn off, and that you enjoyed it!

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 19:31:55 UTC

*BLUSHBLUSHBLUSH*

You flatter me too much. But I'm so glad you found Ludwig easy to relate to, and that you enjoyed it! :)

masterfranny December 21 2010, 21:06:54 UTC

this is so beautiful and heartfelt that my heart aches at this. in the good way.

it's just beautiful! and i think they are so very IC in this, it makes me really happy (i would have loved this fic to go on and on and on, though. sigh, so sad it's finished already XD) ^^

chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 21:08:33 UTC

hee, thank you! <3

And yeah, I guess it could have been longer, but I was excited to move onto my next project~

riyuyami December 22 2010, 02:27:38 UTC

Oh this was such a wonderful story, I love the way it was written and how everyone stayed in character. ^^ But what was Ludwig's painting? I'd like to know what it was suppose to be.

chromatic_coma December 22 2010, 02:39:58 UTC

It was a scene based on the lullaby. The lullaby basically tells about all the animals going to sleep with their mommies, so it's probably just a painting like that <3

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it~

pedoboxers December 22 2010, 04:49:10 UTC

This was wonderful. ;w;

chromatic_coma December 22 2010, 05:40:14 UTC

Glad you liked it! :)