[fic] for Midori_Lover!

Dec 20, 2010 17:52

Name of Recipient: midori_lover
Type of Gift: Fanfiction
Rating: PG-13/T
Title: Taboo
Summary: Ludwig's heart palpitates unnaturally every time Mr. Vargas' tongue darts out to lick those luscious lips of his. But no, it's not possible for him to be falling for his teacher... is it?
Author Notes: I hope you enjoy this, midori_lover!

Sprawled on the floor, with papers fallen all around them, are the most perfect pair of legs Ludwig has ever been blessed enough to see in his entire life. )

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Comments 37

couryielle December 21 2010, 03:49:52 UTC
kdfjads,nfjadshgfkjadshjkgjdl la lak gd!!!!!

fffchsd afhgak aisuehf laj ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!!!!!!

Aherm.

lmao, I bit off the banana cue stick I was chewing on while I was reading this xDDDD (Also, my aunts were already giving me wtf looks because I really can't help lmaoing and fansqueeing xD)

This is so awesomely written and, for some reason, I can really imagine Ludwig as such a closet perv /shot

You are so amazing for writing this ♥

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 04:00:14 UTC
>/////< oh wow, no one has ever keyboard smashed for me before!

That's because he's a closet perv in canon, too! He just fell into the role so naturally.

I'm glad you liked it :)

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franceismyhomie December 21 2010, 05:10:04 UTC
eiajeiwoajieaieajiewajoiea

This was so eoeiwahtoiewhto I can't even describe how fangirlishly happy I am right now xD

Teacher/Student stories are a secret kink of mine, and I never actually thought that it could apply to GerIta

I really liked this story ^^

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 18:08:42 UTC
Hehe, keyboard smashing always makes me happy >W<

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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pinkcatsy December 21 2010, 05:31:49 UTC
I liked it very much. Nice story. I was reading through the comments and agree with you on the teacher-student part.

Thing about me is sometimes, just because it's a story, I don't let things that would normally make me uncomfortable/I would normally condone AGAINST stop me from reading/enjoying it.

Same thing with my writing.

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 18:10:32 UTC
Yeah, when it's fiction it's easier to handle things that would, in reality, be very unsettling. But at the same time, the thought of making them have a sexual relationship when Ludwig's still in high school makes me incredibly squeamish. So yeah, no one's complaining so I guess I did the right thing ^^;

Thank you!

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midori_lover December 21 2010, 05:49:24 UTC
jfkjfkjkjgkjf I love this so much oh god ♥♥♥

I love how this turned from a student-lusting-over-his-teacher affair to something that is incredibly sweet. I just realized now that this prompt must have been difficult to write /sorry for that orz but you wrote this really well! I loved this <333. Thank you for this!

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 18:13:28 UTC
Hehe, oh god that makes me so happy ♥♥♥

Actually, on the contrary, once I got this prompt I got really excited, because it was something I'd seen other people do but never really thought about doing myself. And I was so glad you said "no smut" because I had so much fun showing that sort of progression from lust to love.

I'm so happy you liked it! <3

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darkheart510 December 21 2010, 05:59:14 UTC
I love this! Ludwig was adorable and so very sweet and conflicted, but when he realized his feelings, he just went forward with it. It was very much like him.

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chromatic_coma December 21 2010, 18:11:32 UTC
Thank you!

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