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midori_loverType of Gift: Fanfiction
Rating: PG-13/T
Title: Taboo
Summary: Ludwig's heart palpitates unnaturally every time Mr. Vargas' tongue darts out to lick those luscious lips of his. But no, it's not possible for him to be falling for his teacher... is it?
Author Notes: I hope you enjoy this,
midori_lover!
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Sprawled on the floor, with papers fallen all around them, are the most perfect pair of legs Ludwig has ever been blessed enough to see in his entire life. )
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I... wow, I thought I included a line about that, but apparently not. e_e
On the day of his graduation Feliciano gave Ludwig his email address and phone number, yeah, so that's how they keep in touch once they can.
Thank you!
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"It takes Ludwig a split second to decide that he cannot bear the thought of losing those forty-five minutes of staring at Mr. Vargas’ ass every day."
:D
Also: liked the Romano cameo, of course
Double: in your summary, did you mean 'palpitates' when you wrote 'palpates'? And I think you're missing a 'not' in this sentence: In hindsight, Ludwig will realize that keeping his nose buried in his schedule sheet is a very smart thing to do. There were a couple other small things like that, but it's still a cute story.
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Metal turmoil would be him. He thinks into things too much, huh? xD
I figured you'd like seeing Romano ;)
Also, yes. I am afraid I was so hung up on tense issues I let a few little things pass right by me. I'll go back in and fix those things, thank you! <3
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"I figured you'd like seeing Romano:" no idea why you'd think that! ;)
"tense issues:" ohmanohman I feel your pain on that. Did you find yourself slipping partway through back into past tense? That happens to me so much, it's such a pain to correct.
Also: I feel like I keep on pointing out little things, but the summary reads "Ludwig's heart palpitates nounnaturally" now...
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Oh, just a feeling ;)
Yes, I think I went through it five or six times to be sure.
fuuuck i knew the 'no' went to the wrong place. I'm so, so sorry.
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