It's an interesting short story. A shame my english skill and google babelfish (and my lack of culture) do not allow me to understand better than that. Yeah, it 's pretty. Thank you.
It might be a little harder to understand since some of the details are from the progression of the roleplay. But I guess the dream sequence lines up with the game a little more. :3
I played the 2 games. ("culture" = "Emperor Qin's terra cotta army" "vorapate dosage" I don't know who is that man, Qin sounds Corean to me).
I red 3 times the entier short story and more some passages + dictionary help >.>). I understand it better. I find Gale pretty "hot" in that fic in the detail you describe his condition ( phys / ment) and his (sometime lazy/tired) gestures without using any terms related to the "sex".That is a good way to write (IMO).
"into the the back " .
I 'm questionning about: -"Alternate Junkyard
( ... )
Vorapate is in reference to a drug that Gale engineered to counteract the Atma. It uses Magnetite as a main ingredient (as was mentioned by the Dissemination Machine in DDS1 as a necessary part of the Atma's diet.)
This RP journal stems from a multi-fandom community (dear_multiverse) where characters from any game/comic/movie/book/etc. can interact. Vic/Victoria is a female version (or alternate) of The Question, an eccentric comic book character from the DC Universe. "Tot" is her dead mentor. Vic is more or less an "honorary" Embryon, because she's come to associate so closely with the tribe.
Again, the multi-fandom community brings about some odd/unexpected relationships.
I've seen some of your artwork, and I'd be honored if you were to create some based on this fic; you're very talented!
The roleplay aspects of the fic might make it difficult for general fans to understand some of the details, but you're welcome to post a link for context.
P.S :Dear Xverse community is a dark labyrinth to me; I don't know most of the played characters so I can't appreciate it correclty. (Akuma and Tetsuo lol)
I tried to talk with you via AIM but I probably mispelled your AIM name (I suck). BTW the person I "met" seemed interessing but a little xenophobe.
I tried to contact you because I wish to know your impression about the few drawings I did thanks to your nexus fic . Critique can be harsh (it doesn't matter since it's sincere). It's rare I do that so I would like to know if I was able to grab some what of your fiction.
I was expected for a critique from you without to ask you to do that but I suppose that the fact I 'm banned from a smt C. you think that I 'm an asshole (which is not totaly wrong) but I was banned from a community where people can barely to make a difference between "fag hags" and homosexuals when you know that it is their maine subject.
Anyway , you would be the welcome if you come and give your opinion whatever your interest about SMT evolved on. The link is still the same.
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It came from the bedroom.
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Yeah, it 's pretty. Thank you.
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Thank you!
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I red 3 times the entier short story and more some passages + dictionary help >.>). I understand it better.
I find Gale pretty "hot" in that fic in the detail you describe his condition ( phys / ment) and his (sometime lazy/tired) gestures without using any terms related to the "sex".That is a good way to write (IMO).
"into the the back " .
I 'm questionning about:
-"Alternate Junkyard ( ... )
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Vorapate is in reference to a drug that Gale engineered to counteract the Atma. It uses Magnetite as a main ingredient (as was mentioned by the Dissemination Machine in DDS1 as a necessary part of the Atma's diet.)
This RP journal stems from a multi-fandom community (dear_multiverse) where characters from any game/comic/movie/book/etc. can interact. Vic/Victoria is a female version (or alternate) of The Question, an eccentric comic book character from the DC Universe. "Tot" is her dead mentor. Vic is more or less an "honorary" Embryon, because she's come to associate so closely with the tribe.
Again, the multi-fandom community brings about some odd/unexpected relationships.
I've seen some of your artwork, and I'd be honored if you were to create some based on this fic; you're very talented!
The roleplay aspects of the fic might make it difficult for general fans to understand some of the details, but you're welcome to post a link for context.
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http://community.livejournal.com/atlus_smt/3133.html
P.S :Dear Xverse community is a dark labyrinth to me; I don't know most of the played characters so I can't appreciate it correclty. (Akuma and Tetsuo lol)
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I tried to contact you because I wish to know your impression about the few drawings I did thanks to your nexus fic .
Critique can be harsh (it doesn't matter since it's sincere).
It's rare I do that so I would like to know if I was able to grab some what of your fiction.
I was expected for a critique from you without to ask you to do that but I suppose that the fact I 'm banned from a smt C. you think that I 'm an asshole (which is not totaly wrong) but I was banned from a community where people can barely to make a difference between "fag hags" and homosexuals when you know that it is their maine subject.
Anyway , you would be the welcome if you come and give your opinion whatever your interest about SMT evolved on.
The link is still the same.
Hope to "see" you.
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