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May 15, 2007 19:22

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shiadeu June 11 2007, 13:32:13 UTC
It's an interesting short story. A shame my english skill and google babelfish (and my lack of culture) do not allow me to understand better than that.
Yeah, it 's pretty. Thank you.

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gale_force June 12 2007, 05:26:54 UTC
It might be a little harder to understand since some of the details are from the progression of the roleplay. But I guess the dream sequence lines up with the game a little more. :3

Thank you!

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shiadeu June 12 2007, 08:36:51 UTC
I played the 2 games. ("culture" = "Emperor Qin's terra cotta army" "vorapate dosage" I don't know who is that man, Qin sounds Corean to me).

I red 3 times the entier short story and more some passages + dictionary help >.>). I understand it better.
I find Gale pretty "hot" in that fic in the detail you describe his condition ( phys / ment) and his (sometime lazy/tired) gestures without using any terms related to the "sex".That is a good way to write (IMO).

"into the the back " .

I 'm questionning about:
-"Alternate Junkyard ( ... )

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gale_force June 15 2007, 08:46:47 UTC
The reference to the Terracotta Army was just a cool image I liked. :3

Vorapate is in reference to a drug that Gale engineered to counteract the Atma. It uses Magnetite as a main ingredient (as was mentioned by the Dissemination Machine in DDS1 as a necessary part of the Atma's diet.)

This RP journal stems from a multi-fandom community (dear_multiverse) where characters from any game/comic/movie/book/etc. can interact. Vic/Victoria is a female version (or alternate) of The Question, an eccentric comic book character from the DC Universe. "Tot" is her dead mentor. Vic is more or less an "honorary" Embryon, because she's come to associate so closely with the tribe.

Again, the multi-fandom community brings about some odd/unexpected relationships.

I've seen some of your artwork, and I'd be honored if you were to create some based on this fic; you're very talented!

The roleplay aspects of the fic might make it difficult for general fans to understand some of the details, but you're welcome to post a link for context.

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shiadeu June 15 2007, 11:42:33 UTC
I made a little search immediatly after I asked you about that army (it was in case if the result didn't own somewhat suceptible to inlight (?) me ( ... )

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