Dance in the Dark, Chapter Four

[frisky_biscuit]

Title: Dance in the Dark, Chapter Four
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part not so much.
Note: Please note the rating and acknowledge that you are accepting full responsibility for reading this. You have been warned.
Pairing: Bellamy/Howard
Summary: Matthew Bellamy is a baker who's dragged on a blind date to a dance class where he meets Dominic Howard, the

Comments

[bisbstuff]

Holy hell, SO GOOD! That last scene...*fans self*
Loved that it was from Dom's POV this time.
I just read all 4 chapters now and I completely love this story, can't wait for the next bit!!

[frisky_biscuit]

hehehe Thank you so so much, bb!!!!

I'm so glad that you like it, omgg you're so sweet!

[sheerpoetry]

You know what, I don't know what her problem is, but I would've stood there and fucking watched. Jesus, how stupid is this girl?

*ahem*
IT'S BACK IT'S BACK!!
*happy dance*

I can't believe this is only chapter four! It seems like there's more of it--in a really good way.

But I’ve never felt this way about a woman, either.
Yepp, that maddening little wanker's done gone and gotten under your skin, Dommie boy. GO WITH IT. (And awww, poor thing!)

Yet here he was, battling emotions he’d never experienced before and all because of one tiny, aggravatingly beautiful man.
I love how you kept emphasizing how tiny Matt was ALL through this chapter. Oh, and that description is perfect.

...he’d resolved to try and approach this like an adult as opposed to a young man who’d just discovered his own dick.
*snort* How's that working out for you, Dom?

He looked so impossibly sweet that Dominic’s mouth went dry.Matt does have those moments where he's incredibly cute and I hate them

[frisky_biscuit]

hahahha I can't help my tiny references hahaha. I think of Matt and I think of little so....

Matt does have those moments where he's incredibly cute and I hate them. ;)

*snort* I'm so glad that I'm not the only one who feels that way. Most of the time, when I find Matt cute I'm like "DAMMIT!" :P

<3333

Thank you so so much for your comment girl, you are way too sweet :D

[lov3s]

LACEY, GET THE FUCK OUT! HOW RUDE OF YOU TO INTERRUPT! TSK!

But oh my god, that scene was absolutely delicious! And how Dominic was so confused about Matthew, the litttle baker. Good things come in small packages, Dominic. Remember that. :D I was so thrilled to see that you updated. It's been quite long since the last update. Thought you got lost somewhere, I almost wanted to send a search party out for that. :D Teehee.

<3

[frisky_biscuit]

thank you so so much for your sweet comment, bb :D

I was having some hang ups, but I'm hoping that the worst of them is over. But your awesome comment and your continued support just makes me feel so incredibly amazed.

Thank you so much, bb!

[ashamedbliss]

that kiss, holy FUCK that kiss ♥

and Dom, omg, I loved his train of thought but LACEY OMG. Is it bad that I want them to break up anyway? :')

wonderful! more! :P

*hugs* ♥

[frisky_biscuit]

hahahha <33333

Thank you so much for your comment, Em!!! You make me grin like a madwoman.

*squeeze*

[pancake_hailey]

oh fuck. oh god. wth! nooo, well yes xD but....
okay let me make up my mind.
(13 minutes later)
This was impossibly perfect! Loved how Dom was questioning everything about himself..a..and the making out, just...so passionate that it crashed me down. <3
The last lines made me jump on my chair! O.O
Well done :D

[frisky_biscuit]

heheheh

Thank you so much for your comment!!!! omg I'm so glad that you liked it so much <3<3