Dance in the Dark, Chapter Four

Feb 12, 2011 22:15

Title: Dance in the Dark, Chapter Four
Rating: NC-17 overall, this part not so much.
Note: Please note the rating and acknowledge that you are accepting full responsibility for reading this. You have been warned.
Pairing: Bellamy/Howard
Summary: Matthew Bellamy is a baker who's dragged on a blind date to a dance class where he meets Dominic Howard, the ( Read more... )

belldom, dance in the dark, slashfic

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glorious_rumor February 13 2011, 05:44:17 UTC
Fucking girlfriends, man. Interrupting my hot slashy goodness.

My God, woman, that was some seriously hot action they were getting up to before she walked into the office!

The whole thing was just amazing. I'm so glad this is back and I can't wait to see what happens next.

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frisky_biscuit February 14 2011, 07:05:13 UTC
I know right? Stupid girls. ;)

Thank you so much for your sweet comments! Seriously. Thank you <33

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glorious_rumor February 14 2011, 13:20:44 UTC
Can't just let the boys have their fun.

You're welcome! Everybody on here is always calling me sweet - it makes me happy. :)

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frisky_biscuit February 15 2011, 04:13:26 UTC
well, you ARE sweet :) :)

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weezeuse February 13 2011, 06:06:21 UTC
Nooooooooo! Damn that make out session was hot why did Lacey had to interrupt? Again!

Anyway, this is my first time commenting on this fic because I've just finished reading it and I luuuv it! I'm so glad Stacey recommended this to me, I love the characters, especially Matthew, I find him absolutely adorable and I just want to hug him (which is kinda weird for me because I'm a Dom girl). I love Dominic's character as well, I have to admit that when I first read the summary I was a bit worried that because his character is a dance instructor he would have to be cliché and act all flamboyant and I love you for not falling into that.

I love that story and I feel sad because I've never tasted a cinnamon or honey bun and they sound delicious! I need to find a recipe for them.

Anyway, great story, can't wait to read more and find out what will happen next.

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frisky_biscuit February 14 2011, 07:06:24 UTC
Awww, I'm so, so glad you liked it :D

And hahah nooooo I can't deal with flamboyant stereotypes. I'm so happy that you're liking this. Thank you so much for reading :D:D

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ballpointcrazy February 13 2011, 06:06:23 UTC
LACEY WTF. GET THE FUCK OUTTTTTTT!!! MY GOD.

*cough*

The fucking kissing. The KISSINGGGGGG, bb, so fucking hot and intense and beautiful. I want more...pleasepleaseplease! *bites lip* Fucking fantastic as always.

Omg these parts:

Dominic, despite himself, had quite enjoyed the idea of soothing the brunet after a particularly tense scene of some crap horror film they would watch together.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE /heartexplod'd <3

He looked up to see that Matt had ceased his elephant-like swaying and was now scratching the tufts of black at the back of his neck, his cheeks splotchy with embarrassment.

So goddamn adorable <3 <3 <3

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frisky_biscuit February 14 2011, 07:23:01 UTC
heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee <3333

Thank you so much for your sweet sweet comment :D :D D

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chibichi15 February 13 2011, 06:13:09 UTC
OMFG that was SO hot!!!

but...DAMNIT LACEY!!! grrrrr.....

Seeing this made me very happy and I'm glad you updated! So good, hun! Can't wait for more <3

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frisky_biscuit February 14 2011, 07:23:51 UTC
Thank you so so much, sugar!!!! You are really way too sweet and I'm so thankful for your friendship :)

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chibichi15 February 14 2011, 22:23:45 UTC
n'awwwwww!!! :') Same here hun!

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darthtofu February 13 2011, 06:27:49 UTC
He found himself wondering what kind of toothpaste Matthew fancied, and whether he liked to use swift strokes or wide circles as he brushed.
That's just ridiculously sweet. Love that <3

SHIT IS GOING DOWN. D:
He began to wonder if maybe he would find that it was really nothing at all if he simply let it go and allowed himself to let what would happen happen, rather than telling himself that he could not, must not have feelings for Matthew.
Seemed like such a great idea at first and I nearly cheered, but dat ending. WOAH GIRL. Baaaah!

also, kinda unrelated, but not really:
He loved women, it was true. He loved the softness of their lips, and the silken scent of their hair; he loved the way that a nice pair of tits would rise and fall while strong legs propelled a lithe body forward - oh yes, he loved women.

As for having ever been in love with a woman... Well, Dominic had always just assumed that he hadn’t found the right one.
Um… that's kinda how I've been feeling a lot these days. haha, except opposite.

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frisky_biscuit February 14 2011, 07:26:06 UTC
:D :D :D

Thank you SO SO MUCH for your comment Al <33333

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