This just a plug for anyone who still reads this journal.

I actually went and started a members only writing journal that has somethings in common with FV drollic.

It's in it's infancy (Meaning I have a grand total of 0 members.) but I wanted to see if any of you outstanding people are still hanging around. So If you want take a look.

Thanks.

A poem, second draft, submitted for the critique of the group.

Please cut paste and chop at your own discretion. Poetry is written to be altered.

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( recently C&C if you wish :) )

-pokepoke-
hello?

assuming that we've all not dropped dead, i'd like some revision help. i'm supposed to be recording three to five of my poems in less than a week and i've only chosen two, possibly three, but i need help tightening them up--since i'm retarded and don't know where to begin. any suggestions will be greatly appreciated.

( blargh. )

I'd like to apologize to everyone within Freed_Verses... quite a bit has been happening in my life, one big thing after the other, and there seems to be no end in sight. I know I've been rather unfit to act as moderator, and I'd like everyone to know that it was never my intention to create this community and then abandon it. Thank you to all of ( Read more... )

Sorry I haven't been commenting this past week or two. I'm on vacation in Ireland and my online time is limited. So don't worry, I'm not dead. I'll be back on the 30th.

( new poems )

( Cast your Ballot Folks... )

( 3 three 3 ! )

( review away darlings! )

so i wrote this earlier this afternoon. it's rough. i was just playing with imagery. there has been no thought put into line breaks, etc., and i think it needs more. but what do you guys think of what i've got now?

( boyscouts of america, man )