Fic: Whatever Happens Ne*t, Entourage, Vince/Eric, PG-13ish

[fourteencandles]

Title: Whatever Happens Ne*t
Fandom: Entourage
Pairing: Vince/Eric
Summary: An alternate ending for the episode "The Day Fu*kers." Recap available (from HBO)
hereRating: PG for some swearing, drinking, joking about sex

Comments

[oanja]

Oh, this was lovely. I wish the episode would have gone this way. ^_^

I loved how Vince was so casual about shagging guys. The way he thought about it was just somehow so Vince-like.

And the ending was bonemeltingly sweet. *happy sigh*

[fourteencandles]

Hee! I wish it would have gone this way, too. Think of the fun of Season 5 if it had! :)

I'm glad you liked it and that Vince seemed real! Thanks for reading.

you're my favorite person today.

[dancinbutterfly]

Considering how fucking awful my day was yesterday - you have no idea how amazingly fabulous this is for me. No. I haven't read it yet. I'm saving it for when I leave in 30 seconds for my IV therapy. HOWEVER. I love you. And I thank you. I'll give you a decent review when I get home *squishes*

Re: you're my favorite person today.

[fourteencandles]

Awww. Anything to make your day, which sounds completely sucktastic, a little less so. Hope you're feeling better.

Re: you're my favorite person today.

[dancinbutterfly]

Okay, so you kinda figure I love it dont ya? First- the group scene is fantastic. I have a very tough time writing all 4 of them together and you nailed it. Right on the head. Of course they have rules. I love that Vince's are the least...rigorous. Your Vince is protective yet in character and your Eric is thoughtful and careful. Seriously. I love that he spent a WEEK thinking about what Vince said before he DID anything. And the last bit is so perfectly in character. Vince just dives in. It's what he does.

This is love. You made my day. Big time.

[blueandomlettes]

that was amazing, i want more. I love your Vince and Eric voices, actually I think you capture all their voices perfectly. I look forward to whatever you do next :)

[fourteencandles]

Hey, thank you for the nice comment, and for reading. I appreciate it.

[gigantic]

Ohh, I really like this. The flow conversation throughout the bar section feels really natural, really easy, to the point where it's like Vince and Eric end up talking themselves into something before they really realize it. One second it's just drinks, and then the next you're admitting you'd hook up with your best friend, why not? And then the moment where Vince acknowledges that, yeah, he's even more serious about this -- about Eric -- than he realized is just awesome.

Mmm, them. Very cool!

[fourteencandles]

The bar section was my favorite part to write, because all of those guys would, I think, have these weird rules, you know? So I'm glad it seemed to work! And I think once these guys started on the path, they'd be able to talk themselves into it pretty quickly. :) Thanks for the great comment!

And your icon is a story unto itself. Mm.

[justabi]

I like how Vince is so protective of Eric here, despite all the shit he gave him in this episode about not being able to have casual sex, Vince doesn't want him to when it comes right down to it, just wants him to be E and never change, even if it changes Vince in the end. This makes me happy. Also, awkward boys blushing makes me all kinds of happy, so double win.

[fourteencandles]

I am kind of in love with Eric blushing. I don't know why, but it's recently kind of my thing. ::blushes::

I really think, yeah, he teases, but mostly Vince doesn't want Eric to change... because then he wouldn't be Eric. :) Glad you liked this! thanks for the comment.