Fic: Whatever Happens Ne*t, Entourage, Vince/Eric, PG-13ish

[fourteencandles]

Title: Whatever Happens Ne*t
Fandom: Entourage
Pairing: Vince/Eric
Summary: An alternate ending for the episode "The Day Fu*kers." Recap available (from HBO)
hereRating: PG for some swearing, drinking, joking about sex

Comments

[crazy_thought]

that was so good. espically the end - lol.

[fourteencandles]

Thanks!

[silviakundera]

"What, you've been without pussy for an hour, you turn back into a pumpkin?" Ari says, then glances at his watch. "Aw, fuck it, yeah. Would that I could join you. Go with God, boys," Ari says, and claps him on the shoulder.

Fantastic Ari voice! You've got him down so cold. *is jealous*

"Yep." Eric frowns, and under the table his knee brushes Vince's thigh, quick like he's shifting, but Vince gets it's actually an apology: Eric saying, I wasn't calling you out on the story, I just forgot how it was.

Love this moment. You've captured the quiet, little things that make Vince/Eric glow on the screen, and in fic. :)

Another great story from you. You write this fandom so damn well. The dialogue, scenery, body language - you have them all down so perfectly. A pleasure to read! I've finally been getting the urge to write in this fandom, but luckily my bunnies are mostly Ari/Eric and Ari/Vince, so I won't be intimidated by your awesomeness.

[fourteencandles]

Wow, thank you; this really made me smile. And I reeeeally want to see your Ari/whoever. How's that going? (picture evil grin of Entourage pushiness right here)

[silviakundera]

OMG I SUCK SO HARD.

I have now started 5 freakin' short fics (2 Ari/Vince, 1 Eric/Turtle, 2 Eric/Vince-OMG!), and can't finish a single one of them. I have managed to get blocked on EVERY SINGLE ONE. *shakes fist of fury*

and dude, then I have all these tiny pointless snippets I keep coming up with. which, of course, are totally distracting me from writing the 5 above mentioned fics.

I've decided random things, like how if Vince woke up suddenly as a girl, Turtle would be the one who'd agree to sleep with him. (as E and Ari would be initially too busy freaking the fuck out)

T: "You don't think that's a little homo?"

V: "I'm not talking about blowing you. Just, you know. sex. It's the same deal, just the parts interlock different."

"I dunno, Vince."

"So you're not up for it?"

"Oh hell no, we're totally doing it. I just wanted to let you know that we when do it, it's going to be really, really gay." [grabs Vince's arm and drags him into the bedroom

[iamnotnormal]

^_^ I love your Vince and Eric stories. This is a winner.

[fourteencandles]

Thank you!

[shoshannagold]

So good! As always, Vince is just about perfect, and I love the banter. Nice to see Ari, too! And the rest of it was just sweet. I love how everything's pretty much always going to be okay between those two, no matter what.

[fourteencandles]

everything's pretty much always going to be okay between those two, no matter what.

Yes, as you know, this is my motto. ;)

[ceares]

Aww! Terrific as always. I love your Vince and Eric, of course, but I really love the way you capture Turtle and Drama too. They never feel like an after thought in the story.

[fourteencandles]

I love the other boys kind of madly! So I'm glad you like to see them, too. Thanks for the comment!