Away From His Hand Chapter 15 (End of Part I)

[forever9218]

Title:  Away From His Hand Chapter 15
Current Music:  Bless the Broken Road by Rascal Flatts
Author: forever9218
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Genre: AU/Canon
Word Count:  5706
Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain is the intellectual property of Ms. Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this work and no copyright infringement is intended. Just trying to paint

Comments

Hands 15

[cwby30]

Evenin

Re: Hands 15

[forever9218]

Good afternoon, Bud.

Good to see you around these parts and hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving. I'm so glad you enjoyed my final installment of AFHH. I certainly enjoyed writing this story and have just posted the first Chapter of Pulling Leather today, which will pose it's own unique challenges and opportunities as Jack and Ennis finally try to achieve that Sweet Life. And, you bet, they will be a whole lot of pushing, pulling and prodding. Some of it might even be enjoyable. *wink*

Hope you stick around and let me know how I'm doing. Take care.

Love, Debra.

[gwylliondream]

Just gorgeous writing. I'm glad you are so patient with it. It makes this story a rich adventure. You could have told this story, all 15 chapters of it, in a few sentences, but instead you have told it in such a rich and captivating way.

I got a tear in my eye at the sentence: "But, after all we’ve been through, looks like Ennis ain’t gonna spin away from my hand this time." I love the way you took us full circle.

Have a great break! I'll be looking forward to your return!

XO
Donna

[forever9218]

Happy Thanksgiving, Donna!

Aww, you always leave the sweetest comments, my dear. The break from writing was thoroughly enjoyed, but I missed the boys so I just posted that first chapter of the next part of their adventure, entitled Pulling Leather.

Here's the part of the story where the rubber truly hits the road, or is it the hoof meets the pasture? Wouldn't want to confuse you by misleading you into thinking I was writing about Race Car Driving Jack and Maintenance Crew, Ennis, now would I? Hey, wait a minute. I think I just developed another plot bunny. LOL!

Okay, I can't be distracted. Remember, there's never enough time. Never enough. Not even for a sexy Jack Twist in a skin tight racing suit. Fire retardant underwear would definitely not be optional. Ha! I crack myself up.

Thanks for always reading and leaving the most delightful comments.

Love, Debra.

[forever9218]

Thank you, Tracy. I'm so glad you joined me for this ride and enjoy my take on what had to happened to get these two guys together. The story was a lot of fun to write and I believe I achieved what I set out to do.

I don't have a community title tag for my new story yet, but if you go to my journal, the first installment of Pulling Leather has been posted today. Enjoy, and I hope you had a great Thanksgiving.

Love, Debra.

[argenti79]

Thank you for your story and looking forward to the sequel!

[forever9218]

Thanks so much. I just posted the new chapter today.

Love, Debra.

[tizi17]

thank you so much for finishing this - and especially for giving us part 2 soon.
so well written, i truly love your boys and this story, and can't wait to see the next part.
thank you!

[forever9218]

Thank you tizi. I am so glad you enjoyed my story. Chapter 1 of Pulling Leather has just be posted today. Hope you like it.

Love, Debra.