Away From His Hand Chapter 14

[forever9218]

Title: Away From His Hand - Chapter 14
Current Mood: Curious
Current Music: Savoy Truffle by The Beatles    
Author: forever9218
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Genre: AU/Canon
Word Count: 5468
Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain is the intellectual property of Ms. Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this work and no copyright infringement is intended. Just

Comments

Stumbling

[joetheone]

Oh this was too good to be true. I loved how Jim got all flustered with thinking on Jack and Ennis and how he wants to impress them with one of my favorite deserts it is really wonderful. I also loved how he talked about getting in an accident thinking on Jack well I know I have been to that point at times thinking on both our boys. Then how Jack calmed Ennis down but left a little reminder on his neck well that is priceless and I guess it will be an adults only conversation. Joe

Re: Stumbling

[forever9218]

I'm glad you enjoyed my little surprise, Joe. There will be a few more along the way so I hope you can take it! I thought you might like Jim's "inspiring" meanderings about the boys on his drive over for the barbeque. Jack and Ennis can be pretty darn distracting after all.

Love, Debra.

Re: At the speed of light!

[forever9218]

Who doesn't love a good old fashion adult conversation, Tracy? LOL! Hope you like the next chapter. It's posted.

Love, Debra.

[siri2000]

Just stopping by ...
Liked the sight of the two guys .. it was really special.
And you made my thinking about baking an apple pie for next weekend *lol*
Love, siri

PS bananas flambé with vanilla ice cream, topped by a spoonful of whipped cream is excactley the dessert I used to make ... btw I'm trying to lose some weight ;)

[forever9218]

Hi, Siri. How great to see you here. I have a tendency to comment on the day I post my next chapter so if you're interested, Chapter 15 has just been posted for your enjoyment. And, wow, you can make bananas flambé? Wooooooohooooo. Makes me want to grab a flight out to Germany just for that. Or, and to see you too! Sorry, my stomach was speaking because I haven't had lunch yet. LOL!

Take care and I hope you continue to drop by.

Love, Debra.

[tizi17]

oh how i wish they EVER talked to each other that way.. sometimes i am convinced they did, and annie just left it to our imagination...
but then, things would have maybe turned out differently..

what am i blabbering here? i enjoy your story, thank you!

[forever9218]

oh how i wish they EVER talked to each other that way

I know, if only they could have talked...period! Thanks so much for reading along and telling me how much you enjoy my take on that sweet life. See you for Chapter 15...which is up!

Love, Debra.

[juliathecat]

Thanks for another brilliant and lovely chapter, I was eagerly waiting for this.

Great story, thanks!

Jules

[forever9218]

Hey, there Jules. What a lovely compliment to say that you have eagerly awaited this chapter. Now, you can read Chapter 15. LOL! Just posted.

Thanks so much for all the support!

Love, Debra.

[juliathecat]

YAY!!!! *off reading*

Jules