Away From His Hand Chapter 14

[forever9218]

Title: Away From His Hand - Chapter 14
Current Mood: Curious
Current Music: Savoy Truffle by The Beatles    
Author: forever9218
Pairing: Ennis and Jack
Genre: AU/Canon
Word Count: 5468
Disclaimer: Brokeback Mountain is the intellectual property of Ms. Annie Proulx. No money is being made from this work and no copyright infringement is intended. Just

Comments

[gwylliondream]

Hah! That was great!

"inventive hoovering motion"

Good Lord, woman!

XO
Donna

[forever9218]

Yeah, I kind of liked that hoovering motion myself so you know darn well that Ennis did! LOL!

Thanks, Donna!

[lv2walk]

Wow, I really got caught up in ol' Jim's thoughts at the beginning. I want to know about his 'ex!!! lol

And man oh man, Jack and Ennis got caught, didn't they? Got caught in the afterglow of a little mid-day action! And Jim's so bold, speaking right up like that.

Enjoyed it very much, Debra - loved the picture of the bananas foster, which I've never had. And I like the 3 of these guys hanging out together - I think it's great for Ennis and Jack to have a good bud.

Where's the little wolf pup????

Thanks, Debra!!
Mary

[forever9218]

I see. So you want to to know about Jim's ex, huh? Man you are nosy. LOL!

Yes, the boys got caught partaking in a little mid-afternoon delight. The little wolf pup is still around. You write as if I'm going to get rid of it or something. What kind of heartless woman do you think I am. Hm. Never mind. Don't answer that.

Btw: Chapter 15 is up! Only took 5 minutes. Maybe LJ has finally fixed their posting problems. **fingers crossed**

Love, Debra.

[neverdone39]

I really liked to get into Jim's mind at the beginning of the chapter. He's cute.
Can't wait how the conversation will go. Poor Ennis.
Thank you for another lovely chapter.

[forever9218]

Yeah, I think Jim is a cutie too. He's got that brashness that comes from being young and wanting to embrace honesty, and then having lived in California for sometime now, you know he's a bit more open (more forward) than if he had stayed in Montana where he was born.

Somehow I think Jim also feels a kindred spirit with Jack too. They both are natural extroverts so his words just kinda came out of his mouth before he knew what he was even saying. Let's see, who else do we know who has a gorgeous butt, beautiful blue eyes, eyelashes that go on forever and a tendency to speak before he thinks? **whistles innocently** LOL!

Hope you enjoy their conversation because Chapter 15 has been posted.

Love, Debra.

just wonderful

[grlewis]

this chapter was great. i liked how you got into jim's head, it was a good thing to see/hear. especially his thoughts of jack, although his thoughts of ennis aren't bad either.

i loved how you portrayed ennis' nervousness. cleaning the counter, opening cabinets, walking outside over and over again.

adult conversation indeed. i really enjoyed how forward jim was in describing jack's condition.

what a place for you to stop. i could just plotz. i can't wait for the next chapter where they have this discussion and actually tell someone about their relationship. it should be something.

i like the universe you've created with this story.

Re: just wonderful

[forever9218]

adult conversation indeed. i really enjoyed how forward jim was in describing jack's condition.

what a place for you to stop. i could just plotz. i can't wait for the next chapter where they have this discussion and actually tell someone about their relationship. it should be something.

Yeah, I kinda liked Jim's forwardness too. The question will be what will Ennis think of it! I thought a nice cliffhanger was due just about now, but Chapter 15 is up so you don't have to wait any longer to see what happens.

I'm so glad you are enjoying the universe I created. Just think, this story started out as a one-shot. Guess I lack the ability to shut up with it comes to my favorite men!

Love, Debra.

Away from his hand

[argentine65]

Love this last chapter and love Jim and his thoughts about our boys. Jack in such a small time changed Ennis and made him accepted a lot of things. Thank you so much for sharing. Martha

Re: Away from his hand

[forever9218]

Thank you, Martha.

I always look forward to your warm and encouraging comments. And, yes much has changed for our boys. The question will be how Ennis will handle the challenges ahead. Like another person knowing about their personal business.

Chapter 15 is up so you don't have to wait any longer. Enjoy!

Love, Debra.