Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 176, Arrogance, "Brinksmanship"

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Prompt 176, Arrogance, "Brinksmanship"

Jul 19, 2012 18:30

Title: Brinksmanship
Author: seta_suzume
Series: manga/Brotherhood
Word Count: 484
Rating: PG
Characters: Kimblee & Ed
Summary: It was a deadly game. And who was ahead?
Warnings: none
( In matters of arrogance, they shared some similarities. )

prompt 176, seta_suzume

Comments 5

evil_little_dog July 20 2012, 01:58:53 UTC

OOoooOOooooo.

Sorry I'm not more coherent about this.

pedanticpigeon July 20 2012, 09:57:12 UTC

Ah! I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. I wanted to giggle like a little schoolgirl when I read the last line. This was very well written and in-character. I still cannot get over how perfect your Kimblee was. It's like you pulled him straight out of the manga! Amazing!

I'm making it sound as if I actually like Kimblee, aren't I? Well, I don't (for more reasons than one), but he's just perfect writing material and I have yet to work on him. But my time will come soon enough, Kimblee, just you wait!

PS. The icon. It's beauteous.

sofipitch July 20 2012, 15:16:48 UTC

I really liked this! Beautiful(creepy) work!

ssadropout July 20 2012, 19:56:50 UTC

Love this! You do excellent Kimblee! You have him down perfectly. As creepy as he is, he is brilliantly analytical and brutally honest. (What kind of man could he have been if he weren't so warped?)

cornerofmadness July 22 2012, 21:33:57 UTC

This was great. I loved the tension running between these two (who are both arrogant really) Sadly the last line now has me earwormed for that song...