KH: SoraRiku+Kairi, "Bringing Him Home"uneditedApril 24 2006, 21:22:46 UTC
It was pure mischief that inspired the moment but Sora was glad for it afterwards. It felt like it had been years since he had been back in the Destiny Islands... If had felt like he'd never go home again sometimes.
He hadn't always minded, and he'd always had somewhere more important to be, but he'd never quite forgotten what it was like to not have somewhere more important to be.
But, he reminded himself, it's not quite home yet.Sora tossed onto his side and eyed the taller boy sleeping a small distance away. He propped up his head on one hand and for some reason found himself staring -- Riku looked different, younger when he was asleep, his features rounder and kinder, the way Sora remembered them being. Awake those green eyes shuttered and his jaw set and he always seemed to be looking far away
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Re: KH: SoraRiku+Kairi, "Bringing Him Home"daisysparrowApril 25 2006, 09:18:26 UTC
OMG! You are my hero!
I love it! That's excatly how I image their first few days back on the island would be. Just 'cause they're home now, doesn't mean everything would be instantly all right. And it's like Kairi realize that the bond the two boys forged is not something she can intrude on so easily, she respect it and perhaps even yield for it.
Re: KH: SoraRiku+Kairi, "Bringing Him Home"uneditedApril 27 2006, 21:06:35 UTC
♥ I'm glad you enjoyed! Riku was so sick for such a long time that I feel like, even being home again, he still would need help finding his way home. And of course we know Sora's right there. XD
If you're wondering, I got here via the kingdom_hearts community. I read the drabbles that you posted and just fell in love. You write so well! :) Would you mind if I friended your writing journal?
KH: Olette+Seifer, "Ghosts"uneditedApril 24 2006, 23:43:19 UTC
[[You absolutely may, of course! I'm glad you've enjoyed. ♥ I like Olette too. :3 ]]
She was sitting on Sunset Hill watching the trains go by, her face pressed against the rails and eyes dreamy. Only a heavy footfall gave him away but she scrambled to her feet immediately.
If Hayner were here... But he isn't, is he, it's just Olette and now Seifer.
"What are you doing here?" he demanded coolly, studying her with a smirk that almost made her want to wear one of the plastic bags in the trashcans. If she didn't know he turned that smug look on everyone in Twilight Town near enough his age to be bullied...
"It's not any of your business," Olette told him, "but I'm watching the trains." And if you don't go away fast I'm going to miss the one I'm waiting for.But the older boy meandered over to the railing where she'd been sitting and she shifted uncomfortably, drawing her arm tight against her side when he got close enough that she could reach out and touch him... if she suddenly lost her mind and wanted to get a bone broken or (best
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Re: KH: Olette+Seifer, "Ghosts"uneditedApril 27 2006, 21:10:58 UTC
I really love the Twilight Town kids, they're so full of fun existential issues. XD You're absolutely welcome, and I hope you like your second drabble also -- I have an idea for it, it's just waiting its turn. X3
KH: Roxas/Sora, Roxas/Axel, "What You Have"uneditedApril 25 2006, 21:06:42 UTC
The squeal of sneakers against unyielding marble cut through the air, louder than any scream, louder than Sora's hoarse stuttering breath in his own ears as he defended himself. Every heartbeat was a struggle to keep up with the stranger, who fought with a rare vehemence.
Intuition said, This has been building up between us for a while. But he had no idea who it was in the shrouding black. Sora parried and tried to counterattack but only stumbled when his opponent leapt nimbly out of reach and then dove back close. The brunet was caught off-guard and flinched from the clash of keyblade against keyblade.
He wanted to guess Organization XIII, but he had been wrong about that in the past, and he was certain, so certain, the knowledge a heavy weight on his heart, that this was more than an ideal. This battle meant more than simply being at odds. This was personal
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KH: Axel + Sora, "Yesterday Again"uneditedApril 27 2006, 01:10:13 UTC
[[Your challenge prompt is fantaaaastic! This was the first thing that stuck in my head, and I'm sorry it's not quite along the same lines. *sobsob
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Re: KH: Axel + Sora, "Yesterday Again"piratelickerApril 27 2006, 01:45:43 UTC
Ehehehehe, well you did say challenge and I aim to please :D I had other ideas but they seemed... unoriginal. (There's so many AkuRoku fics but none for AkuSora. Not that I ship them but I'd like to see how Axel handles the situation after Roxas leaves you know?)
Anyway, yesh great drabble. 'Twas something unexpected. Eventho you said it's 'not quite along the same lines' but I think in spirit, it hit spot on. Good job :DDDDD
KH: Axel + Xemnas, "Dusk Falls"uneditedMay 1 2006, 15:36:06 UTC
"Superior" is a title to Axel; one without any meaning. Xemnas could ask to be called Lord, or Queen of Atlantica, and it would all be the same to him. It's a synonym for "guy giving the orders," and Axel is not exceptionally fond of the guys giving orders on general principle. Respect if something one earns, not demands with a title
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Re: KH: Axel + Xemnas, "Dusk Falls"libekoryJune 3 2006, 23:52:00 UTC
Oh, I love this so much. <3<3<3 One of the things that always bothers me about fic!Axel is how irreverant he seems towards Xemnas. We don't know much about his interactions with Xemnas (never actually seeing them in the games, at least), but we do know that being turned into a Dusk is enough to make him try to kill Roxas, which, given his latter-game devotion, makes it a pretty menacing thing. It's one thing, at least, which Xemnas can do to keep the otherwise-troublemaking Axel under control.
I think Axel's whole alliegiance to the Organization is a bit tricky to begin with; you've got a character who thinks nothing of stabbing his coworkers in the back, and yet a year later he's somehow still with the company? So he must be loyal to someone, and that loyalty must exist for some reason. *part of her wonders now if xemnas didn't want the castle oblivion people eliminated; they were, after all, traitors
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Re: KH: Axel + Xemnas, "Dusk Falls"uneditedJune 4 2006, 01:40:22 UTC
I'm sure that if Xemnas had known, he would have wanted Marluxia and Larxene dead, but the Seniors who were there, Vexen and Lexaeus and Zexion, they were loyal to him. (Although aware of Marluxia's rebellion, and rather apathetic about it. They were passive-aggressively thinking of their own methods of going up against Marluxia, but seemed disinterested in confronting him.) And Axel was directly responsible for at least two of their deaths as well.
My personal take on it isn't loyalty so much as survival -- the same reason why Marluxia wanted to take down OXIII instead of just leaving, why Demyx doesn't go off and be a sitar rock star somewhere -- and momentum. He's already here and leaving means getting erased or worse, so survive... and do it with flare, causing as much untraceable trouble as possible. XD
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2. Kingdom heart, Sora Riku (and Kairi if you can fit her in there), sand
Thank you very VERY much. I'm looking forward to it. ^__^
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He hadn't always minded, and he'd always had somewhere more important to be, but he'd never quite forgotten what it was like to not have somewhere more important to be.
But, he reminded himself, it's not quite home yet.Sora tossed onto his side and eyed the taller boy sleeping a small distance away. He propped up his head on one hand and for some reason found himself staring -- Riku looked different, younger when he was asleep, his features rounder and kinder, the way Sora remembered them being. Awake those green eyes shuttered and his jaw set and he always seemed to be looking far away ( ... )
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I love it! That's excatly how I image their first few days back on the island would be. Just 'cause they're home now, doesn't mean everything would be instantly all right. And it's like Kairi realize that the bond the two boys forged is not something she can intrude on so easily, she respect it and perhaps even yield for it.
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Thank you so much!
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You're welcome! *plots for the other one*
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2) Kingdom Hearts: Olette & Hayner: homework
(I like Olette. Can you tell? :3)
If you're wondering, I got here via the kingdom_hearts community. I read the drabbles that you posted and just fell in love. You write so well! :) Would you mind if I friended your writing journal?
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She was sitting on Sunset Hill watching the trains go by, her face pressed against the rails and eyes dreamy. Only a heavy footfall gave him away but she scrambled to her feet immediately.
If Hayner were here... But he isn't, is he, it's just Olette and now Seifer.
"What are you doing here?" he demanded coolly, studying her with a smirk that almost made her want to wear one of the plastic bags in the trashcans. If she didn't know he turned that smug look on everyone in Twilight Town near enough his age to be bullied...
"It's not any of your business," Olette told him, "but I'm watching the trains." And if you don't go away fast I'm going to miss the one I'm waiting for.But the older boy meandered over to the railing where she'd been sitting and she shifted uncomfortably, drawing her arm tight against her side when he got close enough that she could reach out and touch him... if she suddenly lost her mind and wanted to get a bone broken or (best ( ... )
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And I love the fact that you threw in their (somewhat) common tie: Roxas
Everything about this drabble was love!
Thank you so much!
(Also, friended! I can't wait to read more of your stuff!)
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...whee, I is original!
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Intuition said, This has been building up between us for a while. But he had no idea who it was in the shrouding black. Sora parried and tried to counterattack but only stumbled when his opponent leapt nimbly out of reach and then dove back close. The brunet was caught off-guard and flinched from the clash of keyblade against keyblade.
He wanted to guess Organization XIII, but he had been wrong about that in the past, and he was certain, so certain, the knowledge a heavy weight on his heart, that this was more than an ideal. This battle meant more than simply being at odds. This was personal ( ... )
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KH - Axel Sora, time is not linear
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Anyway, yesh great drabble. 'Twas something unexpected. Eventho you said it's 'not quite along the same lines' but I think in spirit, it hit spot on. Good job :DDDDD
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I like the way Sora's taken on bits of Roxas without missing a beat and the way you highlight the difference through body-language.
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Roxas+Seifer: destiny
Xemnas+Axel: power
Sora/Riku: passion (song?)
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I think Axel's whole alliegiance to the Organization is a bit tricky to begin with; you've got a character who thinks nothing of stabbing his coworkers in the back, and yet a year later he's somehow still with the company? So he must be loyal to someone, and that loyalty must exist for some reason. *part of her wonders now if xemnas didn't want the castle oblivion people eliminated; they were, after all, traitors ( ... )
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My personal take on it isn't loyalty so much as survival -- the same reason why Marluxia wanted to take down OXIII instead of just leaving, why Demyx doesn't go off and be a sitar rock star somewhere -- and momentum. He's already here and leaving means getting erased or worse, so survive... and do it with flare, causing as much untraceable trouble as possible. XD
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