SPN FIC - Evicted

[ficwriter1966]

Whew.  Told ya the Muse had gone dark.  I think we need to lure her back into the light.  But in the meantime, sink your teeth into this.  (Three drabbles.)

Characters:  Dean, Sam, John, Cassie, Lilith
Genre: Gen
Rating:  PG
Spoilers:  3.16
Length:  300 words

EVICTED
By Carol Davis

They’ve got one hour to get all their stuff out of the apartment, the

Comments

[nativestar]

Oh ouch. Dean! So painful.

I love drabbles, both writing and reading them and you've done a great job with these ones. :)

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! I've been thinking I'll tinker with drabbles here and there, as time allows. They're fun, like little puzzles.

[lomer]

Aww... great drabbles. I love when stories pack a punch in only a few words.

[ficwriter1966]

Oh, me too! It's like a little missile that zeroes right in on you. Glad you liked these.

[may7fic]

These were fantastic, Carol. Each one of them packed a painful wallop.

[ficwriter1966]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked them. I'll do more! :)

[charis_kalos]

One of the (many) things that caused my heart to ache at 3.16 was that Sam was holding Dean's body and crying over him, while Dean was simultaneously screaming for Sam. Both of the trying so hard to reach the other and unable to do so.

All three hurt - the last one most of all.

Should I send the Muse chocolate? Will that help draw her back into the light?

Hey, you know what would be good? Dean and Morgan telling Lizzie that RJ's on the way, a wee bit worried about her reaction to having a half-brother so much younger than she is, and Lizzie letting Dean know that he's taught her how to love a little brother. Something like that. Hope-full.

[ficwriter1966]

Together, but forever separate...that's always a hurty thing.

The Muse had a chocolate donut this morning. She seems happy.

I kinda set it up in "Three Little Words" that Lizzie and Lily went to town to get the pregnancy tests, so I think we can assume she guessed a sibling might be on the way. But I could definitely do a conversation examining how she *feels* about it. That'll be on the list!

[charis_kalos]

But I could definitely do a conversation examining how she *feels* about it. That'll be on the list!

Squees for the list and entries thereon!

[july_july_july]

Dude. There's nothing wrong with dark, not when it's done this well. I'm telling you: dark chocolate, Dark Knight. Keep 'em coming.

[ficwriter1966]

Oh, so it's YOU who sent the Muse the new black outfit. *nods sagely*

[july_july_july]

Every writer should have a little black dress of woe.