Comments | ficadron: DRA(W)BBLE DUEL #4

wellington in ficadron

DRA(W)BBLE DUEL #4

Oct 06, 2009 13:00

Dra(w)bble Duel #4 is OPEN! :D

Prompt of the week: Fight! Fight! Fight!

( How to Submit and Vote )

Comments 73

sexyscholar October 6 2009, 12:44:20 UTC

lksdfj;alfkjlsdfjk;lfkdj;aslfj;ldfkjas;lkdfjsal;kfjs

Sorry, no submission - yet. This just happens to be, like, my favorite prompt. Ever.

Submission sexyscholar October 6 2009, 20:11:22 UTC

Title: A Hit is Hard to Resist
Team: Team Draco FTW
Prompt: Fight! Fight! Fight!
Rating: R
Word Count: 500 (According to Google Documents ( ... )

Re: Submission VOTE! wwmrsweasleydo October 7 2009, 16:32:07 UTC

Hotness!

This is why we love these boys!

This is why I love you! (Among other things)

Re: Submission VOTE! sexyscholar October 7 2009, 16:45:58 UTC

Thank you x a bazillion!

I have such a weakness for the idea of Ron & Draco embroiled in a real physical fight, so when this prompt came up, I nearly squeed on myself. :p

All that mashing and touching and snarling...

fffffffff.

I'm so glad you liked it! ♥♥♥

VOTE stuckinsea October 8 2009, 05:14:11 UTC

Knew you'd love this one...you love these boys in all their fighting, the blood and the hawt...which was all here...love!

Thread 9

submission wwmrsweasleydo October 7 2009, 16:30:24 UTC

Title: Cho Chang in Charge
Team: Ron
Rating/Warnings:
Wordcount: 491
Prompt: Fight!Fight!Fight!
Disclaimer: I do not own Ron and Draco. (More's the pity. I would make them do similar things to this).

Drabble:“You're sure?” Hermione asked ( ... )

VOTE! sexyscholar October 7 2009, 17:01:09 UTC

LOLOLOL

This is such great crack; I love it!

"Sweetheart, I think we are the winners here."

The first time I've ever agreed with Cho Chang. ;)

VOTE mamalaz October 9 2009, 19:45:43 UTC

Really enjoyed this one! :D That Cho!

Vote alhendra October 10 2009, 14:06:54 UTC

This had me in giggles! Never thought Cho was a genius in disguise :p

Thread 7

Submission hull1984 October 7 2009, 22:13:13 UTC

Title: I Win
Team: Team Ron
Prompt: Fight! Fight! Fight!
Rating: PG
Word count: 100

Fight fight fight

The chant echoes around the hallway. The crowd gathers, taking up the call.

Fight fight fight.

They’re use to this. This is familiar.

Panting, punching, bruising. Blood splatters onto his fist. Pale skin is stained beneath him. White hair spread out on dark walnut.

Fight fight fight.

Purple mottled skin, nail scarred wrists.

And there, curled deep down in his belly. Warm anticipation.

Later. Away from the crowd. Pillowed in silk.

New, and infinitely more dear. Blissfully terrifying and too unknown.

Harder harder harder.

Pale skin, neck stained purple.

Whispers, gasped into quiet places.

Fight fight fight.

Re: Submission VOTE! wwmrsweasleydo October 7 2009, 23:07:31 UTC

There are so many beautiful phrases in this. The contrast is lovely, too, and the parallels. Very physical.

Re: Submission VOTE! hull1984 October 7 2009, 23:27:52 UTC

Thank you.

Your lovely comment is a huge relief - I swore off drabbles after a particularly bad experience and this my first attempt since. You have no idea how much I was shaking when I opened your e-mail ;)

Re: Submission VOTE! wwmrsweasleydo October 8 2009, 07:25:21 UTC

Nothing to worry about. Tricky length, drabbles. This is like a prose poem, which works really well. I really like the way you've handled this. The idea is great, but the actual practise is what impressed me most.

Thread 10

submission wwmrsweasleydo October 8 2009, 13:04:08 UTC

Title: A Letter from the Dark
Team: Ron
Rating/Warnings: Sad
Wordcount: 498
Prompt: Fight!Fight!Fight!
Disclaimer: I do not own any part of the Wizarding World.

Drabble:Dear Ron Weasley ( ... )

VOTE. sexyscholar October 8 2009, 14:05:01 UTC

Jesus. You made me cry.

This is beautiful.

It's writing like this that makes me wonder what the hell I'm doing even trying. This is just so perfect.

Re: VOTE. wwmrsweasleydo October 8 2009, 14:55:56 UTC

Whattyatalkinabout? You writes such hot pron my mind mushes! Now that's what descriptive writing is for!

Thank you very much. I am so happy that I made you cry (if you see what I mean?) 'Perfect'. That's the best review I could get, isn't it?

Now you write more sexy fighting y/y?

p.s recognise my icon?

Re: VOTE. sexyscholar October 8 2009, 15:29:04 UTC

It's wonderful. And so very Draco to write it all down in a letter that Ron may never see...and even if he does, he can't confront Draco and *do* something about it.

It's gorgeous and tragic and I adore it.

You writes such hot pron my mind mushes!

THANK YOU! It might be nice to write something *other* than smutty smut every now and then, though. But that's what comes to me, so I suppose I should just leave it be. :p

Now you write more sexy fighting y/y?

I'll see what I can do. ;)

p.s recognise my icon?

Is...is that TANNER? :FLAILS:

slkfj

Does my icon look familiar? (Hint: follow the butterfiles...)

Thread 13