FIC FOR JE_LEVY

[hyphen_chan]

For: je_levy
From: holly_berri

Title: Those Invisible Lines
Pairings/Characters: Koki/Ueda
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kidnapping, mentally unbalanced Ueda, some dub-con, manipulation and general mind fuckery, Stockholm Syndrome
Notes: Levy! :D This was so much fun to write, you have no idea. Sorry for any vagueness or nonsensical plot - I hope you like it! >.<

Comments

[je_levy]

[This is pre-flail; it may or may not come in CAPS, but it is always sudden and it is often compared to foreplay XD]

MINE

OMFG KODA AND-AND...*ogles all of the header* oh effing wow, ok, officially excite now.

I SHALL PROCEED TO DEVOUR THIS SO STAND-BY FOR POST-FLAIL.

Post-Flail

[je_levy]

&$%@##!! OH MY EFFING GAWD!!!

So I went to read and the whole time I was reading I kept glancing at the side-scroll-bar thingy and frowning because omg, I didn’t want this to end~ I’m so curious about Ueda in this universe and I thought I wasn’t even detailed enough in my sign up comment, but you touched on so many things relevant to my interests….;A; ide. So I finished and then went back to re-read because this. Was. Exquisite!

First of all, anon. I want to say that I ADORE fic like this and so glad you chose this particular style. It’s so fluid, surreal, and flows like stream-of-consciousness. And your writing is so-wow- I’m INDULGING in this prose, seriously.

YOUR IMAGERY!

From the first paragraph in, you made such an incredible use of colour and implicating features that had me immediately rapt.

his bitten and sore looking lower lip firmly caught between his teeth and widening eyes glinting blue black under the lights. This right here spoke mountains to me. Using blue black to describe his eyes brought to mind bruises

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[je_levy]

His voice is smooth and sweet, like caramelized candy Ohhhh~ so gorgeous~!

The voice murmurs against his lips before pulling away This is beautiful, and ok, I do acknowledge that saying that Koki being tied to a bed with chafed wrists, no voice, blind-folded alone in the dark is beautiful, awe-inspiring, and enrapturing may come across as morbid and so very very wrong, but there’s just something about suffering Koki that tugs at my heart and makes me feel that I can’t get enough of it.

Koki stills, shuddering at the way he pronounces his name - velvet covered and careful, like it was his and his alone Oh goodness, instant love. Wow.

“Careful, puppy. Don’t hurt yourself. I do shriek on occasion. And yes, this was one of those occasions

Re: Post-Flail

[holly_berri]

I LOVE YOU TOO ♥

Haha you can't even imagine how ridiculuously happy your flail makes me - I was freaking out inside over giving you something this idek, creeper-like, but I'm so relieved/gleeful that you liked it <3333 And left such an amazing, amazing comment that I can't even. I sat here grinning like a complete moron while reading it :3

Writing this for you was the most fun I've had in ages :D I was kind of going 'Wtf, she wants Koki/Ueda ._.' for a while because I just, that's one pairing I'd never think you'd have asked for lol and I've never written it and just akjdala. Haha there was a lot of panicky flail involved in this but then...I don't know, Ueda took over and start plotting dark fic. :D

Thanks so much for such a bamf prompt and all the gorgeous love!!

[ryogrande]

OH MY GOD.

i think ueda/koki has just been tainted for me forever, because this is the first time i've read it and i will forever think of THIS when i see them in the future. i don't know much about these themes but the stockholm syndrome seemed to develop very well, ueda's bouts of violence just adding to koki's dependency. i particularly liked the complete lack of shame koki displayed during the shower scene, proving how much control ueda actually had over him.

this is an amazing piece of writing.

[holly_berri]

Thank you so so much! I'm so happy that I ruined any potential image of a fluffy Koki/Ueda you might have had >:D you like it! ♥ ♥ ♥ Writing Stockholm was incredibly fun, especially with a psychopathic Ueda :3

Thanks for reading this and commenting :)

[shiharipanda]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O
I'm speechless!!!!!!! O___________O
It's so psycho and heavy.... but I like it!!!! *___*

Its was hard to read cuz my english is not soooo god xDDDD
Btw, I love your psycho fic *-*~~~

Thanks for sharing

[holly_berri]

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm happy you liked it! ♥

[chuckles0505]

Ueda is so positively frightening here and I love it so much.
The way you've developed Koki's Stockholm Syndrome is really superb.
The end with Koki giving up on the outside world and falling completely under Ueda's control really pulled at my heart. I felt so sad for Koki but I don't think you could have ended it any better.

[holly_berri]

Writing this was so much fun - and I'm really happy that the Stockholm didn't seem too ridiculous. ♥

Thanks so much for reading this and taking the time to comment! :)

[starg8fan_liz]

OMG this is so awesome! KODA!!!! XDD love this, love crazy Ueda and how in the end Koki doesn't want to leave. great mind fuckery ^_^♥♥♥