FIC FOR JE_LEVY

[hyphen_chan]

For: je_levy
From: holly_berri

Title: Those Invisible Lines
Pairings/Characters: Koki/Ueda
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kidnapping, mentally unbalanced Ueda, some dub-con, manipulation and general mind fuckery, Stockholm Syndrome
Notes: Levy! :D This was so much fun to write, you have no idea. Sorry for any vagueness or nonsensical plot - I hope you like it! >.<

Comments

[je_levy]

[This is pre-flail; it may or may not come in CAPS, but it is always sudden and it is often compared to foreplay XD]

MINE

OMFG KODA AND-AND...*ogles all of the header* oh effing wow, ok, officially excite now.

I SHALL PROCEED TO DEVOUR THIS SO STAND-BY FOR POST-FLAIL.

Post-Flail

[je_levy]

&$%@##!! OH MY EFFING GAWD!!!

So I went to read and the whole time I was reading I kept glancing at the side-scroll-bar thingy and frowning because omg, I didn’t want this to end~ I’m so curious about Ueda in this universe and I thought I wasn’t even detailed enough in my sign up comment, but you touched on so many things relevant to my interests….;A; ide. So I finished and then went back to re-read because this. Was. Exquisite!

First of all, anon. I want to say that I ADORE fic like this and so glad you chose this particular style. It’s so fluid, surreal, and flows like stream-of-consciousness. And your writing is so-wow- I’m INDULGING in this prose, seriously.

YOUR IMAGERY!

From the first paragraph in, you made such an incredible use of colour and implicating features that had me immediately rapt.

his bitten and sore looking lower lip firmly caught between his teeth and widening eyes glinting blue black under the lights. This right here spoke mountains to me. Using blue black to describe his eyes brought to mind bruises

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[je_levy]

His voice is smooth and sweet, like caramelized candy Ohhhh~ so gorgeous~!

The voice murmurs against his lips before pulling away This is beautiful, and ok, I do acknowledge that saying that Koki being tied to a bed with chafed wrists, no voice, blind-folded alone in the dark is beautiful, awe-inspiring, and enrapturing may come across as morbid and so very very wrong, but there’s just something about suffering Koki that tugs at my heart and makes me feel that I can’t get enough of it.

Koki stills, shuddering at the way he pronounces his name - velvet covered and careful, like it was his and his alone Oh goodness, instant love. Wow.

“Careful, puppy. Don’t hurt yourself. I do shriek on occasion. And yes, this was one of those occasions

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[holly_berri]

I LOVE YOU TOO ♥

Haha you can't even imagine how ridiculuously happy your flail makes me - I was freaking out inside over giving you something this idek, creeper-like, but I'm so relieved/gleeful that you liked it <3333 And left such an amazing, amazing comment that I can't even. I sat here grinning like a complete moron while reading it :3

Writing this for you was the most fun I've had in ages :D I was kind of going 'Wtf, she wants Koki/Ueda ._.' for a while because I just, that's one pairing I'd never think you'd have asked for lol and I've never written it and just akjdala. Haha there was a lot of panicky flail involved in this but then...I don't know, Ueda took over and start plotting dark fic. :D

Thanks so much for such a bamf prompt and all the gorgeous love!!

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[je_levy]

BUT YOU, srsly.

You can't imagine how this fic brain-fucked me. It was just the right element of creeper-like and so fluid, I couldn't help but sparkle all over it.

lol I did feel a little twinge of pity for anyone who got me since I requested a rare-pair out of nowhere and I hadn't even written it myself, but you took the prompt and went with it and it's AMAZING and thank you, thank you for allowing dark!Ueda to take over and augh~ *gurgles* you're the best, really.

I feel like I want to give you something back for making my month with this awesome. If there's ever a fic you want written or ANY prompt you wish for, I offer up my meager abilities to your whim!

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[holly_berri]

YOUR SPARKLES, I appreciate greatly and roll around in. :D

haha but this was such a fun rare pair, especially since people hardly ever write them- I can take tons of liberities with their characters, and no one will ever know lol. XD

oh god, you have no idea what you're asking. :3 haha since I'm kind of a sucker for your beautiful fics, I am so taking you up on that. ...Write me Jin + Twitter fic, pretty pretty please? ♥

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[je_levy]

LOL! I like this prompt a whole lot! It seems to promise great amounts of hilarity and a crack analysis of Jin's tweets. Fun~

I have two other fics in the works for other people, but I promise as soon as those are done, you'll get yours. XDDD

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[holly_berri]

OMG! haha officially excited for this now~ :D and lol take your time, I'm in no hurry. :3