The Bribe - Part Twenty-Three - Conclusion of Book One.
Author: Fenchurch
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Beta’d and greatly improved by the wonderful Goddess47 - this time with a whole added scene and many clarifications - she really is a Goddess!
This is it - the conclusion of the first part of my story. I’m sorry that
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Poor Rodney I really feel for him, looking forward to book 2, really is great stuff.
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But I really don´t like your John. Apparently he never ever thought about slaves even though he was in the military for several years, and even when he is given a slave he only gradually starts to inform himself. He seems extremely careless to me, if well-meaning. He likes Rodney and doesn´t want to hurt him, but still orders him to have sex even though he should know that Rodney isn´t really in a position to make rational decisions. I hope he grows up a bit in Atlantis!
I look forward to the next part.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting and I hope that you enjoy the next part... once I've written it!
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REally enjoyed this. I was struck by the custodial staff. It makes perfect sense in the world you've created and it adds that extra touch of reality and texture to your world.
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Thanks very much for reading and commenting and I'll look out for that sequel of yours!!
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