The Bribe - part Twenty-Three - Conclusion of Book 1

Sep 07, 2009 10:11

The Bribe - Part Twenty-Three - Conclusion of Book One.
Author: Fenchurch
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay

Beta’d and greatly improved by the wonderful Goddess47 - this time with a whole added scene and many clarifications - she really is a Goddess!

This is it - the conclusion of the first part of my story. I’m sorry that ( Read more... )

the bribe, mcshep, slavefic

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iloveatlantis September 10 2009, 01:10:39 UTC
I have read the entirety of book one today--and am absolutely hooked. I look forward to your continuing.

Would you mind if I friend you so I won't miss the continuation?

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fenchurch1 September 10 2009, 07:49:54 UTC
Thank you and feel free to friend me! There will be a short hiatus before Book 2 starts appearing... I haven't written it yet!! I'm glad you enjoyed the first part though.

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fenchurch1 September 10 2009, 08:19:28 UTC
Well, I've written most of the second chanpter and... Oh! You mean the baby! (snigger!) She's due on 25th November (eep!).

Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it!

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silverngold64 September 11 2009, 06:20:52 UTC
Great ending to this book... as long as more will follow! I loved the tender moment between them when John wanted Rodney close, just to touch him. I gave a happy little sigh there! And for some reason, Rodney's thumbs up made me chuckle, because I could just totally see him doing that! All that excitement and looking for his master before the big moment! Great stuff!
I understand that your life will be getting pretty hectic very soon! So I'll be as patient as possible! Just don't get too aggravated if I send you a message now and then, just to let you know that the promise of Book II hasn't been forgotten!
Good luck and Happy Blessings on the impending addition to the family!

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fenchurch1 September 17 2009, 09:55:47 UTC
I think that Rodney can't get over the fact that he HAS someone to look for at a moment like this!

As for nudges... nudge away! I'll probably need a prod or two what with all the baby/moving house excitement going on!

Thank you very much for the comment - it really really helps!

(And sorry I didn't reply sooner... I didn't mean to be rude.)

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fenchurch1 September 17 2009, 09:53:35 UTC
Ooops - sorry - I really meant to reply to this! Thank you very much for commenting and for the baby wishes! Book 2 is in the works, but there may be a slight gap before it appears...!

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fenchurch1 September 17 2009, 09:52:10 UTC
I am going to have fun watching season one again so I can start Book 2! Thank you for the encouragement and, although it may take a little time, I promise that there will be a Book 2!!

Thank you also for the baby wishes - she's getting quite big now! Only 2 1/2 months to go!

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