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katsheswims April 18 2011, 03:04:13 UTC
I cannot tell you how much I loved this story.

I feel so bad for Jensen. I had no idea why he was thinking Jared was leaving him until he told Jared it was because he said he was 'so gone'. It didn't even occur to take a literal meaning for that because I knew what the phrase meant.

But they are making it work. I love reading about them. It's great to get pov from both of them.

I really hope you write more timestamps for it! Keep up the good work!!

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ailinex April 18 2011, 03:31:23 UTC
That is so weird, I literally had just finished rereading The Puzzle and checked the tag to see if there were any hidden timestamps, and look at that, there really is one. Now it's early in the morning and I am completely drained from this heartbreaking sweetness and sadness.
I love this 'verse so much because it offers you a glance at somebody else's way of thinking that is so different from your own, or generally from "normal people's". Yet you learn that as different as somebody might appear, everybody is still needs the same things. Stories like this remind me not to judge a person too quickly because I just can't tell what is going on inside somebody's head -- maybe they just process things differntly ( ... )

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sagaluthien April 18 2011, 19:29:10 UTC
I just have to jump in and reply to you...

Stories like this remind me not to judge a person too quickly because I just can't tell what is going on inside somebody's head -- maybe they just process things differntly.
This is so true. We do seem to judge people all to quickly. Not only when seeing things directly, there are times you hear a friend/woarkmate... talk about someone that is that or that and you have an oppinion about he/she when you might meet he/she and for you it not nessessary is how you think the person is. Things through my life has teach me to meet, talk and then get an opinion. Not easy all the time, but you do a favour for both yourself and the other.

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luiskeln April 18 2011, 03:40:53 UTC
That is just too good to be true. But i read the Puzzle just yesterday and thought that i`d LOVE for some tinestamp for it tp happen, and here you are. Weird, but great.

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mini_menace April 18 2011, 04:28:25 UTC
I love it. I just do. <3

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annie200 April 18 2011, 06:14:11 UTC
This was absolutely wonderful. You wrenched my heart for Jensen and Jared. I love their struggle to make compromises over things they actually don't understand, but because they love each other so much they are both trying.
Poor, poor Jensen. It feels as though he's trying to live life according to a manual written in Albanian. The level o stress made my chest ache whilst I was reading it.

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