Dum Tek Tek - Chapter 3

[facesandmasks]

Title: Dum Tek Tek
Chapters: 3/?
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: G/PG
Warnings: Story has been shortened and divided into chapters on purpose. An elaboration of Nefsi Tefhamni, in which you have to read to understand this.
Genre: Romance, Drama
Summary: A meet in a museum leads to different things.

Refer to: Nefsi Tefhamni

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Comments

[yunnie_yah]

And I thought I would be seeing smut. -_-

HAH.

I'm deprived now~ Why did Yun have to stop??????

[facesandmasks]

Relax. There won't be smut I swear.

Sumpah. No smut at all. Even if there is, it will be very subtle.

[yunnie_yah]

i knw. i was just saying. :)

[facesandmasks]

Me writing smut is an utter faaaylurre.

[chloe1910]

ooh..they are really jumping into the sack almost immediately after meeting each other huh? XD

We can't deny the chemistry or the strong attraction between them...

[facesandmasks]

Hahaha. No sex I swear. This is going to be tame since I'm going to focus on the emotions. =P

[love_cassiopeia]

Can't believe how utterly late I am again!

I find the song totally relatable to Yunho's emotions at the moment. Although it seemed as if the relationship was taking on the image of something one-sided, I'm glad that Jaejoong's finally coming out of his shell and responding to Yunho's feelings.

By the way, is there going to be more detailed smut or is this how you plan to leave it? I apologise for being such a perv >_<

Looking forward to the next instalment, as always =D

[facesandmasks]

Indeed. The relationship looked very one sided but Jaejoong will leave his shell, over time.

If you had noticed, I didn't not explain what triggered Jaejoong to react to Yunho in such manner.

I'm quite doubtful I'll write a detailed smut since I want to focus more on the emotions (since that's my strongest point) than smut.

There will be smut but it's not going to be filled with much dialogue. It will be in the usual style I always write, cool and restrained.

[love_cassiopeia]

To be honest, I'd like to see more opinions from Jaejoong. Perhaps I'll get a bet a better glimpse of the emotions he's feeling at the moment in the next chapter.

Well, I don't think smut will be exceptionally better with dialogue. I think it should be filled with more descriptions and what goes on inside their heads.

Some of the smut I read has lines and lines of dialogue within them, and I think it just ruins the whole thing and makes it extremely lousy to read.

[facesandmasks]

That will be revealed, over time.

Smut with dialogue? Nah. So not me, girl. I'm bad at smut with dialogues.

Maybe smut will be a dangling carrot for the readers? =P

[kyrgyzs_tan]

SUSPENSE!~~~

"Patience is a virtue"--Can't wait for the smut?!

[facesandmasks]

Don't expect smut to be with dialogues and that it won't be so soon!