What's actually ironic is, the parts that sound rushed probably are the ones that, like, weren't. *opposite day!* I dunno, I just couldn't care less anymore. I'm so lazy I don't even feel like crossposting this; I'll probably just let it fester on eternally_skyActually, you know what, considering my usual degrees of "OH GOD JUST HURRY THE FUCK UP AND END", this really was...nothing. So now I'm worried about your rush job statement. :P Oh, well. And it was fun to write C.C. :) Duh. WEIRDLY ENOUGH, I HAD MORE FUN WRITING KAREN. She may yet grow on me as something more than a spineless douchebag
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Oh, yeah, I guess it is out of character for me to have so many technical fuckups, isn't it? /SELF-CONFIDENCE But I reread last night and think I debugged most of them, so hopefully it looks less n00bish now
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I'm reading this at work, so I can't give it all the attention it deserves, but on the first reading, I have to say it's very good. You kept the characters pretty faithful to the way they are in the series, right down to their flaws. I'd love to see more of your Lelouch. I'll have something more constructive to say when I re-read it later. ^_^
Hahahha, I totally posted this at work, using work's Internet. I'll totally lose my job or whatever, but IT WILL ALL BE WORTH IT because you gave me such a lovely comment. ♥
Preemptive apologies for length, lack of porn, and overall WTF, etc. D:
So this is the fic you mentioned! :D I don't know what you're talking about with it sucking. I had to read it fairly quickly since I'm on a bit of a schedule here, but I really liked it! Suzaku's drawing, forgetting and then remembering Euphemia's face, his range of emotions, the "live" command, making Lelouch live - wonderful. His interaction with C.C. was great too - I've been planning on writing post-25 fic where they have a chat, and the dynamic is similar to what you've portrayed.
I will definitely come back and read this more thoroughly when I have time.
Oh wow, I totally mentioned this to someone other than Hope? O.o I'M SURPRISED AT MYSELF.
And don't worry about being on a schedule or whatnot; I just like reviews, especially ones that give me specifics on what I'm doing wrong/right like yours did. ^___^ Sorry if I seem sort of...I dunno, "$^#(&$(#@&$(#*&$#" or whatever because it's been a long time since I've been in fandom, any sort of fandom, and I'm paranoid that I might actually be offending someone without having any idea of it. O__O
Anyway, yeah. I have neurosis. I ♥ C.C. I am TOTALLY GOING TO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR THIS FIC YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT IN THE FUTURE. :D
I think I caught all of the typographical errors, but some things probably still sound weird nonetheless. I gave up on making this decent about halfway, so I'm really surprised everyone seems to like it. ^___^;; But I really am glad that you do, since I inadvertantly plagiarized it off of you
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Preemptive apologies for length, lack of porn, and overall WTF, etc. D:
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I will definitely come back and read this more thoroughly when I have time.
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And don't worry about being on a schedule or whatnot; I just like reviews, especially ones that give me specifics on what I'm doing wrong/right like yours did. ^___^ Sorry if I seem sort of...I dunno, "$^#(&$(#@&$(#*&$#" or whatever because it's been a long time since I've been in fandom, any sort of fandom, and I'm paranoid that I might actually be offending someone without having any idea of it. O__O
Anyway, yeah. I have neurosis. I ♥ C.C. I am TOTALLY GOING TO BE ON THE LOOKOUT FOR THIS FIC YOU'RE TALKING ABOUT IN THE FUTURE. :D
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