I think I caught all of the typographical errors, but some things probably still sound weird nonetheless. I gave up on making this decent about halfway, so I'm really surprised everyone seems to like it. ^___^;; But I really am glad that you do, since I inadvertantly plagiarized it off of you.
As for that whole darkness thing...eh, to me, it's kind of like living in a room where someone's thrown a blanket over the window. *LIVED WITH TWO PEOPLE WHO DID THIS, SO SHE KNOWS, ARGH* It gets, like...really dim, but not pitch-black. And...you get used to it. I could still draw and stuff, but GOD HELP ME when I had to go to work and thus out in the sun. And that was with...like, everyday exposure to the sun and stuff, and only being inside the house for about half of the day. I CAN'T IMAGINE WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO BE SHUT IN THERE ALL THE TIME. ;___;
/bad memories
And really, all of that explanation probably would have been better to be in, oh, say, THE FIC ITSELF, except I felt like a super-direct informative section like that would have totally jilted the rest of the narrative. So in a way, I was hoping no one would notice. >___> UH...SO YOU NOTICED.
As for that whole darkness thing...eh, to me, it's kind of like living in a room where someone's thrown a blanket over the window. *LIVED WITH TWO PEOPLE WHO DID THIS, SO SHE KNOWS, ARGH* It gets, like...really dim, but not pitch-black. And...you get used to it. I could still draw and stuff, but GOD HELP ME when I had to go to work and thus out in the sun. And that was with...like, everyday exposure to the sun and stuff, and only being inside the house for about half of the day. I CAN'T IMAGINE WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO BE SHUT IN THERE ALL THE TIME. ;___;
/bad memories
And really, all of that explanation probably would have been better to be in, oh, say, THE FIC ITSELF, except I felt like a super-direct informative section like that would have totally jilted the rest of the narrative. So in a way, I was hoping no one would notice. >___> UH...SO YOU NOTICED.
*flees!*
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