'Pavlov's Dog', part deux. God, Homer was an ass.

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Comments

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(First of all: ignore the icon.)

Second of all, THANK YOU FOR SUCH AN AWESOME, THOROUGH REVIEW. *sparkle!* I love it when people are totally willing to point out the shit I could have done better, so that way I can actually, you know, DO IT BETTER when I write something else. I'll make sure to check that the pacing is steady after I'm finished my next project, as it's something that's rather hard to see when I'm actually writing.

And of course, all of the nice specific praise you gave me makes me squee a little, too, and I haven't squee'd since I was, like...sixteen twelve. ♥ The phrase "wonderfully fucked up" never makes me fail to chortle with glee. In regards to other fic...well, I blame everything on hopechan. *sighs, starts drafting up Lloyd/Milly*

But again, thank you. You're awesome. *LOVES ON*

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Hey, feel free to friend, but I dunno when I'll have it done. I AM NOTORIOUSLY LAZY. :D

I don't THINK I have any stupid restrictions on friending the fic comm, but if I do let me know and I'll lift 'em, okay? Assuming that you decide you want to put up with me to begin with. ^__^;;

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but specifically: I'm rather quite fond of Zero/Suzaku more over Suzaku/Lelouch, if that makes any sense at all

ACTUALLY, I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT YOU MEAN because I'm totally the same way. Mmmmm, kinky. I'm actually all about, like...the Zero/ANYBODY 'cuz, uh, kinky. I like SuzaLulu too, though, as kind of like a form of adorable revenge for myself whenever I write the angsty dom/sub stuff.

This was such a jawesome review; I'm still sitting here grinning like a loon. :D There will totally be more Geass fic from me in the future, but I dunno when I'll get back to SuzaLulu as hopechan has bribed convinced me with Zero/Karen bondage smut that I should totally write a whole arseload of fics about Lloyd. -__-;; She's sly.

[ichinonaru]

Oh my gawd that was awesome! WHO KILLED HIS MUM! You did a very good way of depicting it without stating any names, only implied that by that time, they both understand it! LIke the language/conversation of Suzalulu that passed between and went thru us~! Argh... I'm not too good with words and I'm not articulate enough to say how wonderful your work is!

[ichinonaru]

Oh and I do think you wrote them very wonderfully, I mean, in terms of characterization! I mean, every bit of idiosyncrasies of theirs was presented like it was part of the real Code Geass show..(too bad there wasn't any pizza hut lol dun mind me, i juz love it) haha I wonder if this would've been the REAL Code Geass ending had there been no 2nd season produced! I really want to see their supposed original ending for ep25 Code Geass! And i think this would've been a very great alternate ending for CG if its only 1 season!

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You know...that really convinces me that I should go back and throw in a scene with Pizza Hut. *thoughtful*

Also, hahahha, I totally doubt Sunrise would have had Code Geass end with buttsex. THAT WOULD HAVE BEEN REALLY SPECTACULAR, THOUGH. XD

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XD;; Well, if I'd actually went ahead and said any NAMES, then I would have had to have taken ANOTHER 1,000 WORDS TO EXPLAIN ALL THAT, knowing me, and then I would finished this and then promptly killed myself. ^________^ So I figured I'd leave it open-ended.

And hey, don't worry, you totally won me over from the "Oh my gawd that was awesome!". ♥

[realms_of_life]

OMG, I love the fact that it is this LONG, so don't be sorry at all. I'm impressed and baffled at your writing. The ending is...breathtaking. I love how sordid and pathetic and LOVABLE both Suzaku and Lelouch are. This fic could have gone so wrong in less able hands, and yet you made it so RIGHT. I love it to pieces. Seriously. I will try to refrain myself from asking you to write a second part, because this fic is so perfect like that, and YET I feel very eager to find out what happens next. I really do! Absolutely brilliant. I really have NO WORDS. Seriously. This was really, really amazing. Congratulations. :-)

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Oh man, thanks SO MUCH for letting me know that a.) it was totally cool that it was so godforasakingly long, and b.) that the ending worked out well, because I had a lot of $^#(&$(@#^#$&( feelings towards it when I was finished. ^___^ You totally just made my day.

[sephyelysian]

Am catching up on my FL now but...wow. Seriously, wow. I think you were too hard on yourself because this fic is wonderful. It's realistic and painful and I love that you make them both live with what's happened, with their own actions. I think it's the best punishment they could both have and it's deeper than simply having them kill each other. The last bit with Euphemia made my breath catch. It was a wonderful detail and I do hope you write more of this pairing soon. ♥

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*FACE EXPLODES FROM FORCE OF BLUSH*

Uh, um, after this, I kind of want to write happy!fic with this pairing...? If that counts...?

*MELTS*