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alter_alterego June 17 2011, 06:14:48 UTC
Ever since Azimio's comments in the last chapter, I've wondered and worried about whether Kurt would watch that video. You made my feelings mirror his own: the agonizing back and forth, the need to know being overwhelmed by the fear of what one would see. It was painful and sad and I honestly didn't know what he would do right up until the moment he exed out of that screen and walked out of his room.

Really, it's amazing how much clearly your writing let's us feel what Kurt is feeling. There is the intense relief when Puck confirms that its clear Kurt is an unwilling participant in the video. The surge of love for Carol as she lies about ice cream in an attempt to offer comfort. The sadness when we first see Blaine admit to his feelings and fear that it's too late. I feel drained when I read this story, because I end up so invested in it.

While I could continue on forever, I'll just mention a couple more highlights for me.

Because if this has taught him anything, it’s that even people you think you can trust, who you think you ( ... )

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emoryems July 5 2011, 07:02:46 UTC
I've read this comment a few (read: too many) times since you left it (and it's been so long -- sorry I've procrastinated on replying), and it always makes me smile. I love every piece of feedback -- it makes my author heart go 'weee'. ♥

Thank you!

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<3 ramenplease June 21 2011, 05:16:34 UTC
You and your story blow me away.

I read this story, and I ache, and my eyelases get all wet and I want to hold poor Kurt and every single person who has ever had to feel this way, but mostly I want to strangle and hurt the person who caused it.

This is amazing heartwrenching and I cannot wait for another chapter.

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Re: <3 emoryems July 5 2011, 07:05:25 UTC
Oh ♥ thank you so much :)

I hope to have the last (haha unless I write codas/time stamps/sequels) chapter out soon.

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haolover9312 June 30 2011, 21:12:10 UTC
Guh! After coming back from my vacation, this was definitely a treat to come back to albeit a heart-wrenching one. I love the emotional subtlety you put into this piece that makes all the relationships surrounding Kurt so fragile (because of the incident) yet so strong at the same time. And I gotta say, my heart was literally pounding when Kurt opened up the video on his computer.
Another great chapter!

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emoryems July 5 2011, 07:06:25 UTC
Awe thanks! I hope your vacation went well, and I'm very happy that you enjoyed :)

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preciousmellow July 5 2011, 04:50:12 UTC
Your writing is absolutely amazing. Just amazing. You make me feel so many emotions, and the part where Kurt asked Blaine why he didn't want him just absolutely broke my heart...for both of them. I can imagine Blaine feeling guilty too, because if he had just owned up to what he was feeling with Kurt and asked him, he never would have gone with Ian. This is fantastic and I can't wait for more.

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emoryems July 5 2011, 07:08:09 UTC
Aw thank you for the lovely comment! I'm glad you liked ♥

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fragil3thing July 5 2011, 14:02:34 UTC
I just read this fic today from start til this latest chapter. and I had to stop myself from time to time to detach myself from it.

I love that you have depicted Kurt's emotion in a way that feels so real and vulnerable, without being over the top, that I can't help but be affected and invested on this Kurt.

What really got me teary-eyed is his interaction with Puck, it was just so beautiful. And I could really see that scenario as possible based on how Puck's character evolved in the show.

Props to you dear writer! *sniff sniff*

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emoryems July 6 2011, 18:10:06 UTC
Thank you :)

On Puck: that scene was a result of participating in the 30 days of Puckurt drabbles in June, and it was an absolute pleasure to explore his character. I'm very happy that you like it ♥

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