Yunchun Video Exchange [Round 1] Title: Letting

Mar 08, 2009 13:16

Title: Letting
Pair: Yunchun
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: angst
Length: One-shot
Word Count: 1, 173
Summary: What Yunho goes through when Yoochun leaves.
A/N: Sorry for the mistakes and for the last minute post

Yunho could only wish for him to comeback or maybe just to look back, for the benefit of the doubt, just a lie, a little white lie that he cares. )

yaoi, yunchun, fic: letting, dbsk, yoochun, yunho

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dorkii_simba March 8 2009, 16:28:54 UTC
HEEEE!!!
SPOT~

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dorkii_simba March 8 2009, 16:37:31 UTC
*ears droops*
well...that sure made my morning >>....
i always want yunho to get hurt but seesh XDDD feel sad for him too *gets shot by yunho fans* XD awww...poor yunnie T_T *throws a shoe at yoochun* ah-well at least the ending is a bit hopeful ^^"|| loved it unnie!!! HWAITING! thanks for posting!! ♥

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emda March 8 2009, 17:01:14 UTC
*hugs*
Thanks for reading and commenting and cheering for me!!!!!!

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emda March 8 2009, 18:23:01 UTC
Im not.

God I miss trapesista too... I should kick myself to finish the next part.

Thanks for reading and commenting!!!!

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emda March 8 2009, 18:51:29 UTC
Im really not!

que me apiade de mi? LOL pobre yunchun... pero es q tampoco quiero que sea un mainstream pair por que despues pierde el encanto. So a cuanta gotas tendrá que ser

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renichifreak March 8 2009, 21:43:28 UTC
...T__T Poor Yunho...

This was pretty...I really liked it!!

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emda March 9 2009, 02:26:18 UTC
:)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

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emda March 9 2009, 15:56:55 UTC
Oh Lord... Im glad I could achieve that at least, cause it was really a freaking task to make the story and the lyrics match.
Well my little daughter that part is and it will always be needed.
And I dont mind you saying that, I'll promise I find time to check it out (thou no promise in the near future cuz I got a book to read and I havent even bought it)

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naeve14 March 11 2009, 01:34:15 UTC
the love is still there.... barely lingering in the air, but it's not enough to hold Yunho longer with all the uncertainty and bleak future...

Yoochun, Yoochun, Yoochun.... i like the way you portray his selfish bastard self, although i think he still need Yunho, even when he leaves the other man behind to pursue his dreams and ambitions, and i dare betting all my money that he probably has been using Yunho as his muse for his songs... way to show his love but unfortunately, Yunho's practical man. subtle hints, not working well for him..

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emda March 11 2009, 01:55:39 UTC
reading the entries of the exchange? *giggles* wow... your comment is almost a great start for a awesome fic.
I just have to let something for the next person to hang on and continuate the story. I think more than pratical, Yunho is in a stage that he just cant wait, hints or no hints his not gonna wait or at leats thats on my mind.

Im so looking forward to the next round!!!!

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naeve14 March 11 2009, 02:29:19 UTC
*laughs* it's a good way to start my mundane morning (always *rolls eyes*) at the office and i need something stronger than caffeine to chase sleep away and apparently my 2U angels are the best remedies for that *smiles*

i think, Yunho's been waiting, unconsciously. although he did moved on (he requested for relocation) but it shows that instead of wanting to leave Yoochun for good, he still found the time to drop Yoochun his final message, that to me, is actually a subtle hint, for Yoochun to go and find him instead. to turn the tables around and to see if Yoochun worth all the heartache he's been through all this while...

indeed, it is going to be a start for a good fic (i hope). idk who i might get but yours is one of the few that i think i have the confidence to give justice and not to ruin all the beauty it holds during the 1st exchange *smiles*

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emda March 11 2009, 02:42:15 UTC
I would glady do all the reading after I finish all the freaking writing I have.
Plus Yunchun is a good start.

Thats exactly what I hope the author thats gonna write the second part of this fic sees. (is freaking really excited about second round)

Well remember you can actually say which fic you feel more confident to write about. Awww thanks for saying this is beautiful. And well I think anyone can make a good or great second part for this.

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