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Yunchun Video Exchange [Round 1] Title: Letting

Mar 08, 2009 13:16

Title: Letting
Pair: Yunchun
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: angst
Length: One-shot
Word Count: 1, 173
Summary: What Yunho goes through when Yoochun leaves.
A/N: Sorry for the mistakes and for the last minute post

( Yunho could only wish for him to comeback or maybe just to look back, for the benefit of the doubt, just a lie, a little white lie that he cares. )

yaoi, yunchun, fic: letting, dbsk, yoochun, yunho

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naeve14 March 11 2009, 01:34:15 UTC

the love is still there.... barely lingering in the air, but it's not enough to hold Yunho longer with all the uncertainty and bleak future...

Yoochun, Yoochun, Yoochun.... i like the way you portray his selfish bastard self, although i think he still need Yunho, even when he leaves the other man behind to pursue his dreams and ambitions, and i dare betting all my money that he probably has been using Yunho as his muse for his songs... way to show his love but unfortunately, Yunho's practical man. subtle hints, not working well for him..

emda March 11 2009, 01:55:39 UTC

reading the entries of the exchange? *giggles* wow... your comment is almost a great start for a awesome fic.
I just have to let something for the next person to hang on and continuate the story. I think more than pratical, Yunho is in a stage that he just cant wait, hints or no hints his not gonna wait or at leats thats on my mind.

Im so looking forward to the next round!!!!

naeve14 March 11 2009, 02:29:19 UTC

*laughs* it's a good way to start my mundane morning (always *rolls eyes*) at the office and i need something stronger than caffeine to chase sleep away and apparently my 2U angels are the best remedies for that *smiles*

i think, Yunho's been waiting, unconsciously. although he did moved on (he requested for relocation) but it shows that instead of wanting to leave Yoochun for good, he still found the time to drop Yoochun his final message, that to me, is actually a subtle hint, for Yoochun to go and find him instead. to turn the tables around and to see if Yoochun worth all the heartache he's been through all this while...

indeed, it is going to be a start for a good fic (i hope). idk who i might get but yours is one of the few that i think i have the confidence to give justice and not to ruin all the beauty it holds during the 1st exchange *smiles*

emda March 11 2009, 02:42:15 UTC

I would glady do all the reading after I finish all the freaking writing I have.
Plus Yunchun is a good start.

Thats exactly what I hope the author thats gonna write the second part of this fic sees. (is freaking really excited about second round)

Well remember you can actually say which fic you feel more confident to write about. Awww thanks for saying this is beautiful. And well I think anyone can make a good or great second part for this.

naeve14 March 11 2009, 03:46:51 UTC

mind you my dear, when you are continuing on someone else's work, the difficult part lies in the ambiguity of how good you think of the next author's work, that you've read. either you like the style of their writing or not, because other than pleasing the readers, you need to bare in mind if the original writer's going to like how you continue their story or not. that's something that worries me a lot, coz i can say most entries for this exchange are beautifully done (mine not included coz i'll be bias^^)

oh, i've been reading your trapesista (spelling?) and so far i like all the maze that you put in the story although i got to be honest with you, the lack of Yunchun interactions frustrate me. that doesn't mean that its not good, just that i'm on edge, waiting for the development of the pair. it is a very interesting concept and so far i like it a lot *smiles* update? *laughs*

emda March 11 2009, 05:06:38 UTC

well I think the author that are on the exchange can do a good job, plus as a author of the first part I have to get rid of every idea I have for the next part cuz no one thinks like I do. I always like the second round cuz I can see how others saw the story I wrote and how the thought it should end. I agree with you that most of the entries are beautiful and I think mostly because we are mixing the videos and the songs we love with the pair we love.

Oh Lord... Trapesista... the lack of Yunchun frustastes ME the most. But I do promise Yunchun action will be there soon (Yunho is very focus of having a piece of Yoochun) so it will come. I hope is not so twisted that people cant read it.
I'll try to update soon! Thanks a lot for reading Trapesista

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