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Prologue: Chapter 9

May 10, 2011 06:50

Prologue: Chapter 9
Title: Prologue (chapter 9)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance/Angst
Pairing: Kara/Zak and Kara/Lee
Disclaimer: Not mine!
Summary: Daybreak flashbacks, extended edition. Lee gets back for the funeral.

( It's the would have been that's too much for either of them to handle, and they sit in silence. )

pre-mini, lee/kara, battlestar galactica, fanfiction

Comments 10

rdave1 May 10 2011, 13:52:55 UTC

*deep breath*

Tears in my eyes reading this. You can just feel the pain that Lee and Kara are going through. I like the notion that Zak was the only person who truely knew Lee and Kara.

It sad to see Lee not able to grieve for his brother, between taking care of his mom and worrying about Zak.

Can't wait to see more!

embolalia May 10 2011, 20:12:28 UTC

Thanks for all your comments today! My students were being particularly hellacious and it was lovely to get all the little messages on my phone. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

rdave1 May 10 2011, 20:14:47 UTC

You are teacher! Very cool.

embolalia May 10 2011, 20:19:06 UTC

Yeah, I teach middle school special ed to kids who spent an hour calling my a f*ing b* today (does LJ have profanity rules?) because they'd like to both not do any work and also pass my class. But only 27 school days until summer break!

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koolaidmom11 May 10 2011, 16:49:59 UTC

I can totally see this happening this way...I would love to see some follow up fic.

You done good girl!

embolalia May 10 2011, 20:12:49 UTC

Thanks! There will definitely be more to come :)

newnumbertwo January 5 2014, 16:24:07 UTC

Ouch! So many feels. And when Lee wakes up alone and panics, it's so much like in "UB." Gorgeously hurty.