Fic: Lullaby (Lilly, Ensemble) R

[em2mb]

Title: “Lullaby”
Author: em2mb
Pairing/Character: Jake, Lilly/Weevil, Duncan, Lilly/Logan, Logan/Veronica.
Word Count: 1,307
Rating: R
Summary: Sometimes Veronica Mars wonders if Lilly Kane ever existed at all. She’s remembered as a daughter, a sister, a lover, a friend, as everything and nothing at all.
Spoilers: Generally through 2x22, “Not Pictured

Comments

Freakin' awesome! :)

[earth2mars]

Yay! Here I thought I'd see the new yet-untitled dark fic and instead I found this gem! YAY! So glad I got online

Re: Freakin' awesome! :)

[em2mb]

I, too, am glad you got online. Your feedback makes me so happy! And since we talked yesterday I think you know the fic isn't stopping any time soon. I'm more haunted by Veronica than Logan will be in Dark!Fic. ;)

I'm glad so many people noticed the popsicle thing because I wanted this scene to be foreshadowing in a way. Like, perhaps, on some level Jake always knew where his daughter's recklessness would land her. And I'm throwing those solitary phrases in just for you now.

The Lilly/Weevil part was the second to last one I wrote, and I wasn't sure what I was going to say until I started saying it. It just flowed, and I went back and I'm like, is the confessional thing too dirty? Then I decided Lilly was that wild

[cartoondoggy]

Lovely story! I loved the imagery of Logan putting his hand on Veronica's pregnant belly and the empty place for Lilly at Veronica's wedding. Great job. :)

[em2mb]

Thanks! It was that little snippet of Logan that made me want to write this. Glad you liked it!

[motylik]

This was really nice. I really liked Duncan's part and Jake's was every parents worst nightmare. And I loved Logan and Veronica with the hints at how their lives went. Great fic. And really realistic. ;)

[em2mb]

I'm especially glad you liked Duncan's part because for me it was the hardest to write. He's almost as much of a mystery as his sister.

[midnight_27]

Nicely done.

I love the details you put in the story like how little Lilly somehow got the ice-cream and Logan visiting Duncan and Lilly 2.0 in Australia. Plus, Logan and Veronica are parents. The whole idea of only getting glimpses of Lilly was perfect, because in the end, Lilly was truly a mystery.

[em2mb]

It was so hard for me to keep it down to a few hundred words, since any one of those scenarios I could have flushed out to pages. But I wanted to keep it fleeting like their memories of her as the years passed. Thanks for reading!

[lazaefair]

I'd suggest journey, blur, angel, or dream for possible words.

[em2mb]

Psssh, you. You don't get any more fics dedicated to you since Dark!Fic (that's what earth2mars and I are calling the Logan story you and I plotted out) will be like, yours to behold forever.

[lazaefair]

Oh, don't worry about dedicating any more fics to me, even if you use one of the words I suggested. I'm quite content with DarkFic.

[em2mb]

Did you watch the finale? You should have if you didn't, or get Googling, since there's going to need to be a few changes made, and I'll need your help.

Lake is wonderful. Wish we had a boatful of Asians, but you can't have everything...