Love Woven Through Two Territories

[elsewhere87]

Comments

[ella_rose88]

Oh Mara this is just lovely! I think my favourite part of this chapter is the Gwen and Irgaine scenes! You have written them so well and its great to see the admiration they both have for each other.

I also love the pacing of A/G's growing relationship. But Arthur is still being an ass and I can't wait for Gwen to make him realize the errors of his behavior.

I can't to read the next parts!

P.S: I'm now following you on Tumblr! I'm theres-always-hope on there so feel free to follow me back ♥!

[elsewhere87]

I loved writing the Gwen and Ygraine scenes so thank you so much. That means a lot coming from you because I loved your Gwen and Ygraine scene in your fic that you wrote before. I always feel inspired by it along with the one true scene we got of her on tv when writing Ygraine.

lol, he is an ass, but he's slowly getting better. And I'm glad the pacing is working, so important.

Thanks so much!

[minah_25]

Great update can't wait for the next update. Arthur is such a jerk and can't wait for the moment when he is to be made to feel the way she does. Gwen is right everyone has pain and loss he needs to man up and work through it.

[elsewhere87]

Right, Arthur is not very nice right now which sometimes is a challenge to write, but also fun. And I'm glad you agree with the point Gwen made.

Thanks!

[sv_lilah]

I have so many emotions right now.... I don't know how to deal with then all so I'm just crying.... Like ugly Castiel crying... Ugly Kristen Bell crying on Ellen crying... And I'm not going to stop crying until you update. Is there a way to read the original version because I don't think my heart can take this waiting.... I just want him to love her.... And I know he will cause come on she's amazing... But damn it Arthur.... Love her already!!!

[elsewhere87]

Oh, you're making me emotional, ah. What a response. Thank you.

You're right, he will. Gaze at the poster a little. It tells the story. This is ultimately a romance and about family and many things really.

Here's the link to the original version, but remember it was incomplete too. http://ag-fics.livejournal.com/78393.html#comments

The expanded version I'm writing now does have a scene that I think will make you a little happier. That's probably two updates away. I just don't want to rush this one because building their relationship is very important to me and keeping it real. I don't want to push them together right away. So hopefully people won't mind waiting a little more. :)

Thanks so much!

[sv_lilah]

My mother always said patience was virtue.... I should probably wait for your updates. One shouldn't rush perfection. But really.... I'm waiting anxiously for the next update. This is gonna sound bad but I can't wait til Gwen is kidnapped! I want to see Arthur going insane.

[elsewhere87]

Yeah, that part is meant to be such a climactic event in the story and it's going to take a bit, but it's coming.

Thanks. Sometimes I feel a little odd, not so sure about my writing and posts like this really make me smile!

[2sam11]

I still love it! I`m also glad that you keep the building of their relationship slow! I adore all the Igraine scenes with Gwen&Arthur :) I`m happy that Gwen got at least a few people, who stand with her! Arthur is such an ass, but in some way i like it <3 He should learn, that betraying his wife will not help. It`s like Igraine said: "No good can come from a marriage without trust and care."..... I can`t wait, till Gwen will bring the caring Arthur back. Great work, like always!

[elsewhere87]

Yay, I usually like to go slow and so having readers that agree with that kind of pacing is nice.

The Igraine scenes are very important to me so glad you like those too.

lol, it's so funny. Arthur being an 'ass' is terrible and yet also it's kind of fun to write, ha!

But yes, the betrayal part, that I want learning experiences from.

Ah, thanks so much, what a lovely review to receive!

[dive2blue]

did you make any changes? oh, don't get me wrong, this is a great update but i didn't remember reading most of the part you wrote in this chapter in ag_fics challenge.

but this is good, not complaining ;)

[elsewhere87]

Yeah, I did. I expanded some parts definitely. But I'm doing my best to get it to fully fit in with what I had before. but yeah, this one had a lot expanded. And then there are all the scenes that I originally had. Just some are longer and some are exactly like they were in the original.

Does that make sense? Hopefully.

lol, thanks!