Love Woven Through Two Territories

[elsewhere87]

Comments

[hope27]

Once again your writing floors me. It's so beautiful and I love the little touches that you've added that really help the development of the story. Arthur still has some major growing to do, but you can see the seeds being planted and how Gwen is bringing out the good and honorable man i him.

When I first read this at ag_fics, Arthur's speech to her at their wedding dinner just broke my heart - you could FEEL Gwen's pain. I was so upset with Arthur and it's still the same emotion during the second read. Such great writing.

This this like was heartbreaking as well:

Giving a tight smile, Gwen nodded. “Yes. I’ve gotten used to it since I’ve come here.”

I can't wait to read the next parts! Hope they are coming along well! Keep up the amazing work! :D

[elsewhere87]

Oh wow, kind.

I'm glad the added parts work. The wedding dinner scene, as small as it was, that was powerful for me to write so I'm glad it conveyed strong emotion. And yes, some not so fun scenes. He's being pretty awful to Gwen, but he's going to continue to see the error of his ways and she will be strong in her convinctions.

Thank you so much, beautiful feedback, made my day!

[imigination]

i didn't review the first time i read this installment, but i came back to see if you'd updated and thought i would take the chance to say that i'm really enjoying this AU. you've captured the origins of them both perfectly, even in these different circumstances. i'm resisting reading the rest over at ag_fics ;) can't wait for more <3

[mara93]

I think I've said it before, but your feedback means the world to me. When I entered this fandom and I read your stories, I was transfixed. I still am. You are hands down one of my favorite A/G writers. Your action scenes inspire me so much. And your Gwen is simply one of the best I've ever read.

So to get these comments from you, makes me so happy. I'm glad you're enjoying this. I love writing it. I got sidetracked for a bit with the AG fic battle which was lots of fun, but I should be updating this soon.

Yeah, I appreciate the resistance because I feel the second time in writing this, it's more coming together to what I wanted it to be. I'm keeping intact everything I had in the original, but just expanding the bits I had wanted to then.

Thanks so much! <3

[sv_lilah]

Ok. So technically I've read these 2 chapters 3 separate times. Does that make me crazy?

[mara93]

Ah, I've been working on the update and it should be up soon, but I got distracted while participating in the AG fics battle. Go over there. So many great reads. If you look at my links on the side, you'll see the AG fics link and the stories are in the third post I believe. There are over 1,000 comments! so you'll find it easily. :)

If you need a direct link just let me know. :D

[sv_lilah]

Ok.... I'm clearly an idiot because I have no idea what you're talking about. I know about the challenge cause it was all over tumblr but I don't know where to read them. :(

[mara93]

Oh you've got to read! No matter whose stories you like there's just so much there, maybe even new authors you haven't read.

Here's the link: http://ag-fics.livejournal.com/81963.html#comments

Just look at each author's main description post and there are prompts posted in the comments. The authors responded to those comments and so you'll find tons of mini stories! Even crossovers. :)

[sv_lilah]

My heart... I love this story so much. It's my favorite. I've read these three chapters so many times it has to be lol!