Hand in Hand- Part 6

[armor_of_guilt]

And here is... Chapter Six!! Mwahaha! I didn't take as long this time! But this chapter is a bit short for my liking... and pretty strange in my opinion o.O;; I dunno. I hope you guys like it!! I was so inspired for the later chapters of this fic, but they're later and... not now so it makes me frustrated. Well, I'll just have to work faster and

Comments

[kittyal]

“Sorry, Brother! But I’m keeping your pants-! Oh my…”
“AL!! STOP LOOKING!!!”...XDDDD <3333 good job

p.s. this one made me cry 2 times

[armor_of_guilt]

Thank you!!
I really enjoyed that part... maybe a little too much?
^^;; Heheheh...

Ne, I'm sorry it made you cry! -is not sure if it's good or bad crying-

[kittyal]

aaa don't mind me i cry all the time (i'm a /emo kid) <3333 the fic can't wait for the next part

[maxxim_huzzah]

I cried too. ;____;

And love on your icon! XD

[maxxim_huzzah]

I second Kittyal, this chapter made me cry too. ;____; There's lots of fics where Ed goes through angst because Al's body will always remind him of what he did. Hearing the words actually come from Al AND seeing the aftermath from Al's point of view was so painful and true to them. And for once, Ed wasn't immediately running to apologize to Al for everything. Yay!

Crying = no yay for me. ;_;

Can't wait for the next chapter. ♥

[armor_of_guilt]

Aww... So much with the crying!!

Yeah, that's kind of the impression I wanted to leave. Ed and angst is always there, always. Now his guilt is contagious for poor Al. I'm glad you liked it! ^w^

[michirukaiou]

Ohmygod, that was sad. I don't know if it's just because I read that after watching something that made me cry and get into a depressed mood, but this was actually a bit painful to read. But totally in a good way, because... ^^; I mean, it's good that you get your readers that involved in the story. (Judging from the two who commented above, I'm not alone. I didn't cry, but I sure felt terrible for both of them.) This was a lovely chapter, really... it was sad and angsty (were you ever right about that in the warning), but I'm glad that they at least made up in the end. I also loved the part that kittyal pointed out. XD And I thought the ending was perfect. It might have been a bit short, but it was still very good. I'm definitely not complaining. .... Okay, maybe I'll complain a bit. When is it not going to be one-sided? ;-; It won't be for a while? Sigh. [/complaining] Anyway... yay update. Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one, as always.

On a completely unrelated note, I love RENT, and I love that song. :)

[armor_of_guilt]

I'm making everyone depressed, aren't I? At least it's in a good way... ><;; I'm happy you think I get the readers involved! An accomplishment!! As for the angst, I believe my warning was pretty accurate ^^ but I just didn't have the heart to make them angst through the entire chapter, they had to make up at some point! Yay, the pants are loved!

I know what you mean about the one-sidedness!! I'm yelling at my muses, but they don't seem to get it... I do know that hopefully, if not in the next chapter then chapter 8, some more stuff will build up to Al's big confession. I don't mind the complaining, I know I'm a mean writer >w< Thank you for the comment again!!

OMG, RENT is so awesome. My favorite musical-thing ^^ and that song is what inspired this story! Well, more or less... I can't say anymore!! -tapes mouth shut-

[chibi_nyo]

That was really cute :3

Love this fic <3

[armor_of_guilt]

Thank you!! ^w^

[meia_krane]

*squeals

[armor_of_guilt]

OMG, I'm loved!! ^w^ Aw, thank you! -blush-

That part was happiness in a bottle to me, could not resist the bittersweet-ness leading up to the "Awww..." Yeah, I know I sound kinda weird right now but I'm high off happiness from reviews! Squealing is fun, so is reading stuff about pants! I'm glad you think it's funny!

I love you and your art and your fics so we're even! xD
Go angst!

[meia_krane]

XD oh yay you love me too!!!

I'll be doing all the posible to finish your comic today and post it today, reading this has really inspired me to do a lot of coloring.

yay for angst!

[armor_of_guilt]

I'm gonna get a comic!! SQUEE! -glomps- You're too nice to me! I can't wait!

Coloring is fun ^w^ I wanna get my scanner to work so I can upload pics... -kicks scanner-

Angst is the awesomest!