Hand in Hand- Part 6

[armor_of_guilt]

And here is... Chapter Six!! Mwahaha! I didn't take as long this time! But this chapter is a bit short for my liking... and pretty strange in my opinion o.O;; I dunno. I hope you guys like it!! I was so inspired for the later chapters of this fic, but they're later and... not now so it makes me frustrated. Well, I'll just have to work faster and

Comments

[box_of_doom]

This chapter almost made me cry. And I generally don't get emotional when reading! Great job!!!

And having Al change Ed was hillarious. I can't wait to see part 7!!!

[armor_of_guilt]

More almost-crying!! I feel special. Thank you!

Ed just strikes me as the kind of person who doesn't like formal events and wearing those kinds of clothes. Then it's up to Al to dress him! Yay! Thank you again!

[armor_of_guilt]

I know I must update more often... T_T I'm sorry world of elricest!!!

I wonder if it's just a bad case of creator's block? o.O I dunno...

Wow... I'm not sure if that's an error or not... I remember what I was trying to get across at that part, but it doesn't look right. My friend just said it wasn't, so I don't know. O_O

Thank you for commenting!!

[sushilady]

*Fangirl flails* This totally made my day.

"Plus, he agreed the office was too small.

Go figure." - That was the funniest thing in the fic, and much needed after the angst. Err, was, until...

"“Sorry, Brother! But I’m keeping your pants-! Oh my…”

“AL!! STOP LOOKING!!!”"

And.."Really… you should tell someone when you decide to go commando" - That was brilliant XD. Alphonse's angst was horrible, and showed just how dependent he is on his brother. I can't wait for the next chapter. =D

[armor_of_guilt]

Really?! -sparkly eyes- Thanks!!

I know, that was basically what I was working up to during their whole fight and silence. That one line. xD 'kidding, but it was still funny to put in to me.
Thank you! It's Ed's little secret... shh! ^w^ Al can only angst when he's all alone without his brother. He is dependant, in my opinion, but he can overcome that when the time calls for it! I'm happy you liked it!

[ankoku_tenshi]

“AL!! THAT’S MY SHIRT! NO WAIT-! NOT MY PANTS!!!”

“Sorry, Brother! But I’m keeping your pants-! Oh my…”

“AL!! STOP LOOKING!!!”

+dies laughing+ That was the best part EVER!! Way to break the ice! Great job on this chapter!

[armor_of_guilt]

Thank you!! -stares- OMG! I killed her! ><;;

To much angst needs an ice breaker, methinks ^w^

[vierge_de_fer]

ZOMG I.LOVE.THIS.STUFF

You know, i didn't read your fic as first 'cause it was only one sided elricest...But that ==> "since I found myself being lifted into the air and carried into the house bridal style." made me wanna read it from the begining^^

And i really didn't regret it ! That fic is just too COOL !!!! And i love the last part , when Al removes Ed's boxer xDDD
Their reconciliation was lovely too !

Keep up the good work ! I wanna read the other chapters so ba~d !!!