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Songfic challenge by Nemi

Aug 13, 2005 00:38

*shy* Hi. This is my first entry in this community.

Title: Don't Let Go
Author: Nemi octoberxsong
Website: http://rhapsody.s-aint.org
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: It was just supposed to be dinner.

Thank you so much to kimberlyfdr for the amazing beta. I can't stop praising her. *blush*

( It's tiny, only 743 words )

Comments 16

c_regalis August 14 2005, 12:48:08 UTC

Oh, that's lovely.

I love this: Hands and clothes and stumbling through the dark, landing on crisp, white covers, as if the bed knew someone would be coming here tonight, and that someone would be touching here tonight.

And like Grey I really like the image of them cocooning themselves against the world.

The ending is perfect.

Thank you for sharing this.

nerdwegian August 15 2005, 19:09:19 UTC

Thank you for the feedback, I'm so happy you liked it! :D

lozenger8 August 15 2005, 12:35:55 UTC

I'm another one who appreciated how early this is in their relationship. *sigh* Very visual, very pretty.

nerdwegian August 15 2005, 19:09:49 UTC

Hee, thank you. *blush*

sam80853 August 21 2005, 12:51:42 UTC

Awww... how wonderful! Lovely!

And HOT!

So romantic... Gah...

take_no_ko August 26 2005, 20:36:50 UTC

That's really nice. Especially the last line...:)