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Songfic challenge by Nemi

Aug 13, 2005 00:38

*shy* Hi. This is my first entry in this community.

Title: Don't Let Go
Author: Nemi octoberxsong
Website: http://rhapsody.s-aint.org
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Rating: NC-17.
Summary: It was just supposed to be dinner.

Thank you so much to kimberlyfdr for the amazing beta. I can't stop praising her. *blush*

( It's tiny, only 743 words )

Comments 16

lilac_one August 12 2005, 22:54:25 UTC

This is lovely and hot.

When Fraser came to himself, he still hadn't let go of Ray's hand.

I adore that. It's a perfect ending.

nerdwegian August 13 2005, 16:06:26 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

grey853 August 13 2005, 04:08:35 UTC

Very hot and sensual. I like the image of them cocooning themselves against the world, just the two of them. Very romantic.

nerdwegian August 13 2005, 16:07:00 UTC

Thank you. *blush*

moirin_keeline August 13 2005, 09:24:10 UTC

Ah, love this! It's sexy as hell and also cute. And i'm happy that in your Version they get the grip so early in Partnership / Relationship, not years later. They both need and deserve someone to love and to share live with.

Really a nice Story and welcome in this community. You've made a great start. :-)

nerdwegian August 13 2005, 16:07:39 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)

peter_neverland August 14 2005, 04:05:22 UTC

What an awesome start to the partnership. It puts the whole rest of the relationship in a whole new light. Excellently done.

nerdwegian August 15 2005, 19:07:31 UTC

Aw, thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)

torakowalski August 14 2005, 11:45:39 UTC

Amazing story. Beautiful writing, very vivid description. It was the hands, even more than the amazing hotness, that really got me *g*

nerdwegian August 15 2005, 19:08:26 UTC

Hee, you noticed the hands. Thanks for the feedback! :D *squee*