Hey guys. This place has been dead, I know, and I've done an awful job at reviving the creative flow, but hopefully with the influx of members (thanks vestiges and the coming of spring and summer (!) we will all have the opportunity to work on our writing, explore new ideas, etc ( Read more... )

So yeah, this is my first post here. I'd love to hear lots of criticism (hopefully of the constructive kind), because I really do want to get better at this stuff. But any and all input is very much appreciated. Also, I know this place is mostly for poetry but I hope one or two short stories isn't a huge deal :]

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I want to do something more with this but I'm not sure what.  Maybe it just sucks a lot and I should forget about it altogether.  Tell me what you think, please!

I am awake, but not alive.

hey everyone! this is something i wrote a little while ago. ( + )

halp!

John Joubert (tentative title ( Read more... )

You've coaxed my tendrils from the filthy earth ( Read more... )

poppies, like red bulbs ( Read more... )

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English written task: Ever been hypnotized?

Dearest love,

I’m sorry.

We rolled up the carpet so we could dance but the doves were falling from the sky. Your world had changed ever since you dreamt of the possibility where two of us kissed publicly in the city of Houston where conservatives lust for past and progressiveness is a joke ( Read more... )

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