Second Choice; First Choice DRAFT

[dreams_power]

Title: Second Choice; First Choice
Genre: Fiction, tad romance
Words: 1,500
Summary: Sometimes a teenager's first crush doesn't go anywhere; but the second one could.
Warning: Girl+Girl relationships, as well as het.

Comments

[michael_collins]

Now I see where you get your ability from, you write like a maniac. While the story's not exactly my thing (I'm all about the drama XD) it's very well-written and realistic.

I'll probably keep reading some of your stuff as you're the only new writer I've found on lj that I actually liked...

[dreams_power]

>.> <.< Actually, it just all seems to come at once... I don't write much for a month and then I have some free time and write a lot. Writing something every other day is a new thing for me. This was a dream that I had... yesterday... without all the dream-things that were kind of on crack.

Hm... Drama you say? I guess that's why you liked the break-up story... Well, I did write a piece with drama (I think) Here. Sorrowful drama maybe?

^.= You say that so enthusiastically. Though I do appreciate the fact that you like my writing (for the most part I'm guessing?).

What do like to read though? Maybe I can refer you to some people. Fanfiction? Original fiction? Gay/straight/no pairings?

I saw from your layout that you like Tsubasa. Do you like manga in general or...?

and speaking of Tsubasa, as soon as the mods over at 100fanfics approves my claim, I'll be writing TRC drabbles if that interests you

I'm a bit giddy at the moment due to the fact that someone actually agreed to draw me a goose in a RCMP uniform... It's a long story.

[michael_collins]

RCMP eh? I hope you don't live in Calgary, I'm in love with half the population of the city (from the internet)...nevermind XD

Used to write game fanfiction but now I'm sticking to original stuff, but I'll read your Tsubasa stuff if you like. Don't care about pairings or genre really as long as it is interesting and written well.

Yeah I'm a pretty big anime/manga/rpg fan, that's where most of my artistic influences come from (all my drawings look like Final Fantasy, my music sounds like Yasunori Mitsuda and my writing uh is about as realistic as a fourth-grader's fairy tale)...

what the hell, if you wanna blab at me on im, you can catch me on msn at mutronbiphase@hotmail.com or mutronbiphase on aol. There is a very high deficit of smart-artistic-people-i-can-talk-to in my consciousness (you can never have enough anyway!)

well this comment is quite long enough. have you ever heard of the band OPETH? I am listening to them now, they are quite good. ANYHOW, I AM HITTING POST NOW.

[dreams_power]

Nope, I live on the other side of the continent xP. Nova-Scotia actually. Though why should I not live in Calgary??

As always, it's up to you. Don't usually write fanfiction so I thought the challenge would be interesting.

*Raises hand* Hi, my name is Steph and I'm an anime/manga geek. I know exactly what you mean, though my drawings tend to look like stick figures.

True dat. My MSN's mylia_, and AIM's kirashana. I'll add you and say boo if I ever see you online. Timezones might make that a little iffy though...

No I haven't actually. Do you have a link I can download a song from? My computer has enough issues without limewire and its kin. In return, well... I have anime OST's, japanese/italian/spanish/french/english music. Take your pick xP

[yaoikitten]

First, edits

It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[dreams_power]

fixed, temporarilly fixed, fixed, and touché.

I think part of the problem you mentioned was that this was originally a dream. I wrote it fairly quickly because the dream was fading from my memory, so all the background that was in my head got lost in translation. It's not a good excuse, but it's an explanation.

I'll fix it after exams. Should be good practice.

Re: It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[yaoikitten]

lol! I figured since we already had that discussion I could tell you what I really thought. XP

Re: It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[dreams_power]

Had a feeling xP

But honestly, I know you're right. I usually let things sit for a few days, then go back to it because I have a very short memory most of the time so I see what I wrote more than what I wanted to write. I was lazy. I shall try to prevent myself from being lazy from now on.

Of course, waiting too long isn't good either. I can't quite remember what happened in chapter 8 of CIOTPA, I probably will once I read the new chapter; but who knows.

God I need sleep. Why do people have to be noisy TONIGHT of all nights...