Second Choice; First Choice DRAFT

[dreams_power]

Title: Second Choice; First Choice
Genre: Fiction, tad romance
Words: 1,500
Summary: Sometimes a teenager's first crush doesn't go anywhere; but the second one could.
Warning: Girl+Girl relationships, as well as het.

Comments

[yaoikitten]

First, edits

It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[dreams_power]

fixed, temporarilly fixed, fixed, and touché.

I think part of the problem you mentioned was that this was originally a dream. I wrote it fairly quickly because the dream was fading from my memory, so all the background that was in my head got lost in translation. It's not a good excuse, but it's an explanation.

I'll fix it after exams. Should be good practice.

Re: It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[yaoikitten]

lol! I figured since we already had that discussion I could tell you what I really thought. XP

Re: It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[dreams_power]

Had a feeling xP

But honestly, I know you're right. I usually let things sit for a few days, then go back to it because I have a very short memory most of the time so I see what I wrote more than what I wanted to write. I was lazy. I shall try to prevent myself from being lazy from now on.

Of course, waiting too long isn't good either. I can't quite remember what happened in chapter 8 of CIOTPA, I probably will once I read the new chapter; but who knows.

God I need sleep. Why do people have to be noisy TONIGHT of all nights...

Re: It was the fanbrat comment wasn't it?

[yaoikitten]

I know, that is why I don't like to wait too long between chapters but I am not being productive right now. I'm going to start though, I sat down and planned the rest out tonight so I have goals to complete and I want to write a chapter in a week or two and get on a quicker rotation. I am working on 10 tonight, and the book will wrap up at 15. Goal is to get it done before I leave for Japan so I can hopefully "start" my new book while I am over there. *crosses fingers*