Title: It’s Not Enough, Just a Touch
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#56Summary: Harry Potter rushed into marriage, eager to start a family of his own, only to realize too late where his true preferences lie. Now, there is no turning back as he waits nervously in this restaurant, knowing nothing will ever be the same again.
Rating: NC-17
Warning(s): Masturbation
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I also wanted to say WHAT ARE YOU ON ABOUT in your A/N, being nervous and insecure and all of that. 1) I am REALLY NOT a scary person. 2) This is BLOODY GREAT \o/
Hehe, I promise I don’t think you’re scary, even more so now that I’ve gotten to know you a bit better since I first wrote this. I can only recall that feeling of dread and nerves when I looked closer at the prompt mid-writing and saw the user who posted it and then realized, “oh, oh. This is the same person who has written some of my favourite H/D fics. Gulp.” But yes that only made a million times more amazing when it turned out you really enjoyed this!
And I love the way you've sprinkled in details about the Malfoys from Pottermore! That's the first story I've read which incorporated the new information and it fitted in seamlessly. I’m so glad you enjoyed that part! When I saw that a Draco Malfoy backstory was going to be posted to Pottermore I think I may have literally thrown myself on the ( ... )
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This entire paragraph is beautiful:
The temptation always increases during the night. As darkness spreads throughout the house, Harry’s desires build and rise inside like a turbulent storm, ready to break at any moment. He can hardly contain the waves of want that crash through him as hides away in his study, slick fingers pressing inside of himself. In times like these, as he desperately strokes his stiff prick, he often considers going to some club, finding a random man and releasing all this built up tension. And yet… Harry can never follow through on this. How could he bear to cheat on his wife after so many years? He curls his fingers, pressing against that spot and stifling a moan that threatens to escapes as shudders of pleasure move through his body. The truth of the matter is, if Harry were to cheat, if he finally succumbs and stoops so low, there is only one person he would surrender to. Soft grey eyes, slender hands, fine pale hair, perfectly curved pink lips... Harry’s hand speeds up, the pressure building, and ( ... )
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I truly enjoyed this, mystery author. It was so angsty, but, I don't know, it made me feel it was a gentle sort of angst. Even with all the struggling Harry went through, realising his sexuality, realising what was missing from his life, falling in love with Draco, not being able to have him, not really and knowing Draco wanted him back, with all that, the way you wrote it, all the years they missed, they couldn't be together, so worth it at the end for this ending. Lovely, thank you! <333
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