Trouble in Paradise (Juntoshi)

Jan 25, 2012 14:11


Something quick and dirty while I work on things for the auction winners.

Pairing: Juntoshi (established)
Universe: Collar
Concept: Ohno and Jun have a fight
I blame boblemon for this one, and my general frustration at life, the universe, and everything
Thanks to  for satsumatsufor looking over this!

Trouble in Paradise )

ohno, juntoshi, jun

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sesquerdo January 25 2012, 23:37:33 UTC
Thanks for sharing! ^.^ I missed your Collar Universe, although I wasn't expecting a fight! XD But it was different and interesting, Ohno can get really irritated sometimes... But, OMG, what is Jun-kun doing?! O.O It is not like him to disappear like this... I hope there will be a continuation...
And I need to get back to Boblemon-san’s fics... RL can take all your time sometimes…
And I hope you are feeling at least a little better!

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doctoggy January 26 2012, 00:22:29 UTC
Oh, this is in no way done. its my second WIP at the moment, but it is being more cooperative than the other fic, and I am solidifying the events in my head for hte auction fic, so look for that soon.

Set sometime between the Arashi Around Asia and AAA+Dome and Time, I think, would be the beginning of things with them, and the Hanadan 2 time period, so I just need to work out a few more details about the how Jun realizes, and his reaction to it all. But it has been on my mind.

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sesquerdo January 26 2012, 01:12:44 UTC
Thanks for letting me know about the auction fic, the details are exciting, but, seriously, don’t worry about that, you can take your time! ^.^ And if you feel like writing something else before, there is no problem, after all, writing should be fun to you! ^.^ And, actually, I appreciate this one that you did, I just hope things end fine or else my heart will broke! XD But it sure is interesting the new development at the actual phase of their lives! ^.^ So, thanks again! ^.^ I can’t wait for the continuation! ^.^

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doctoggy January 26 2012, 01:21:00 UTC
I am amused that I am writing a fic that ties back to a fic that I havent finished ^^*

I want to write yours, its just that the details haven't solidified in my head, and I cant write it until it kind of snaps into place, so to speak.

But I have to write yours, and then one more, so I need to get on that, since you were kind enough to donate

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harunomasu January 26 2012, 09:14:03 UTC
Aww, I would like to know what happen behind Jun's sudden action. Hope this will be explained further :)

p.s I'm still slowly trying to finish your collar series. Sorry. It was just a bad week at work (you know what happen) so yeah /sighs
But I promise I will read them soon. This one quite promising :)

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doctoggy January 26 2012, 20:23:15 UTC
Well, this is just more collar verse stuff, so you are still reading it. And I do know, and its OK. Take your time.

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doctoggy January 29 2012, 20:17:16 UTC
added more, though it still isnt done yet.

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boblemon January 26 2012, 12:29:27 UTC
I'm sorry? :DD Except not really. This is looking good so far, calm Leader getting riled up and Jun's mysterious disappearance...! And he was probably right about Ohno getting sick, huh? ^__^ I wonder if he's going to be able to probably take his vacation or not.

Can't wait to finish this story! It's super interesting so far and a good addition to the universe I think!

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doctoggy January 26 2012, 20:24:17 UTC
I am sure you are very sorry. :glares: :)
I should have it done tonight, hopefully, we shall see.

Trouble in paradise... oh, i have a title now. :)

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doctoggy January 29 2012, 20:18:05 UTC
while it isnt done, its longer. its turning into something a bit longer than i expected. and all from a comment in that contest thread you made in your LJ. I seriously blame you for this. But its not a bad thing at all.

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doctoggy February 1 2012, 07:46:02 UTC
all done! unbetaed though.

i still blame you for this, but its a good thing.

now lets see if i can crank out my action fics and your challenge fic this month.

here is hoping for inspiration!

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harunomasu January 30 2012, 03:05:41 UTC
Shouldn't it be "omiage" instead of "omiyage"? Just saying :D

This is still WIP or will be continued as chaptered fic? I love the collar series, you know that :) This is quite light so I can read it without getting depressed :D

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xrachiebunniex February 1 2012, 09:54:22 UTC
my heart always drops when you write about these two. i don't know how you do it but you just do XD

i loved the care package idea and how neeeen helped <3 i could really do with a care package right now as i sit in my bed sick to my head T_T *stares at her tissue pile on the ground and all of the bottles of water around her*

good job~ <3 i loved oh-chans stubborness. it reminds me of the hna ousama no brunch interview thingie where the whole group ganged up on him about the possibility of him being sick where he won't admit that he's sick~ <3<3

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doctoggy February 1 2012, 17:47:59 UTC
Oh no, get better!

Good to know that Ohno insisting that he isnt sick is not too far off of reality \o/

These two are fun to write, so thank you for reading!

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