Trouble in Paradise (Juntoshi)

[doctoggy]

Something quick and dirty while I work on things for the auction winners.

Pairing: Juntoshi (established)
Universe: Collar
Concept: Ohno and Jun have a fight
I blame boblemon for this one, and my general frustration at life, the universe, and everything
Thanks to  for satsumatsufor looking over this!

Comments

[boblemon]

I'm sorry? :DD Except not really. This is looking good so far, calm Leader getting riled up and Jun's mysterious disappearance...! And he was probably right about Ohno getting sick, huh? ^__^ I wonder if he's going to be able to probably take his vacation or not.

Can't wait to finish this story! It's super interesting so far and a good addition to the universe I think!

[doctoggy]

I am sure you are very sorry. :glares: :)
I should have it done tonight, hopefully, we shall see.

Trouble in paradise... oh, i have a title now. :)

[doctoggy]

while it isnt done, its longer. its turning into something a bit longer than i expected. and all from a comment in that contest thread you made in your LJ. I seriously blame you for this. But its not a bad thing at all.

[doctoggy]

all done! unbetaed though.

i still blame you for this, but its a good thing.

now lets see if i can crank out my action fics and your challenge fic this month.

here is hoping for inspiration!

[boblemon]

That turned out very nicely, didn't it! :D I loved seeing grumpy!Ohno and Jun trying his best to deal with him while still struggling with his own insecurities. The emotional problems they resolved were pretty intense for something I thought was going to be quick. >_< And you had good timing as usual, Ohno thinking Jun was ignoring him while Jun was really just working his ass off. It reminded me of Secrets and Consequences there for a while in the middle.

Yay! I'm so happy to see more of this and I'm glad that I caused it, lol. Thank you so much~

[doctoggy]

I think I am incapable of writing short things ^^*

Grumpy!Ohno was fun, as well as frazzles Jun, but we didnt get as much of that since it was mostly Ohno's persecutive, but yes. Its odd, how a suggestion of they get in a fight turned into this, but I think that its a good thing. So thank you.

I thought that it might be a bit secrets and consequences in the middle, but at the same time, it was what has happening with the story. I am not sure what i could have done to make it different, since that was the story that it wanted to tell. :shrugs:

[boblemon]

I am also incapable of writing short things, haha. But I've been told that isn't bad, lol.

It turned out very nicely with some real fighting in there and Ohno not being the stable rock that he always is. :) Really, the pleasure was all mine ours?

Mostly I just thought about S&C because I was like "POOR MISUNDERSTOOD JUN <3 it'll be made right eventually."

[doctoggy]

So I will blame this on lack of sleep, and caffeine, but poor misunderstood jun turned into poor unfortunate jun which then brought about memories of the Little mermaid. So thank you :)