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Dec 25, 2008 12:04

Title: Without Brains Brings New Lives On Christmas Eve
Rating: PG
Characters: Mainly Matsuda (POV until the ***'s), Soichiro, Mogi, Aizawa, with a little Light and Ryuk
Warnings: Mentions/use of alcohol, if that counts as a warning.
Genre: Slice of Life, Comedy
Word Count: 1448
Prompt: Contrasting Life
Summary: The task force goes for a ( Read more... )

razzberridust, secret santa

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lycoris December 26 2008, 11:43:36 UTC
Oh, that was rather sweet. :) I like that the Chief loses some of his inhabitions once he gets drunk. And the image of Mogi and Aizawa singing karaoke is highly amusing! Your Matsuda is so sweet, it's really quite lovely.

(did you mean it to all be centred though? It makes it a bit harder to read than if it weren't ...)

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razzberridust December 26 2008, 21:04:29 UTC
Heh, thank you so much. ^o^

Oh? Err, I kinda type out all my fics like that. I didn't know it was hard to read....^_^;

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versipellis December 26 2008, 16:23:55 UTC
Awww, thank you! That really is rather sweet ^^ I really liked the way you interpreted the prompt, and the way different characters used alcohol made me grin! Thank you!

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razzberridust December 26 2008, 21:05:30 UTC
Thank you so much for your comments, I'm glad we got to be each others SS's. Thank you again for the fic you wrote for me. ^o^

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speaky_bean December 28 2008, 06:47:32 UTC
Oh cute! I liked this concept, it was very interesting, and I'm sure it has happened at least once or twice! I literally burst out laughing at the part about being old being a priority. There were parts that seemed a little implausible, and the centering thing did make it hard to read, but this was really a good story! :D Nice job.

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scratchmist December 30 2008, 20:36:47 UTC
Well, that was a refreshing change from the usual creepy/angsty Death Note fic. I thought it was cute, although I would have wanted to see the parts when they were actually drinking - they were suddenly intoxicated in their dialogue, and it was funny but a bit too quick. I like how Light didn't destroy Christmas in the end, too.

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