DIAMOND CITY STARBEANS APPLICATION POST 3

Oct 07, 2009 12:19

APP PAGE IS NOW CLOSED.

Due to a format change in the game, you can snag your characters using the following page:
http://diamondsignpost.livejournal.com/10474.html

THANK YOU!

Mod Statuses: (As of January 19th ( Read more... )

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Maguro App saffmk January 15 2010, 05:33:36 UTC
Out-of-Character Information
Name and Livejournal: saffmk
Are you 13 or over?: Yes
Time Zone: +7GMT
AIM: saffmk
Tegaki: saff
Anything Else?: I AM LAME PERSON. I will respond to any kind of messaging on the weekends, since I’m busy on the weekdays. Also, English is not my first language, yadda yadda. Plus, I wanted to post this app days ago, but my mind got a blank for three days.

In-Character Information
Name (and age/-relevance if applicable): Sasaki Maguro (His first name is Maguro | 16)
Species: Some sort of Tuna-Human hybrid. Human.
Series: Puyo Pop/Puyo!
Canon Point: PP7 had happen, it makes things simpler that way! Especially for someone who only recently appeared.
Occupation or status upon arrival: Student, looking for a part-time job.

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Maguro App part.2 saffmk January 15 2010, 05:34:55 UTC
Personality:
Overall demeanor: At first glance, Maguro could consider as either a name-caller or flamboyant, sometimes both. He doesn’t, per say, call names to piss people off, it’s just his way of showing affection. There’s a reason to this, it’s just how his loving father taught him how to interact when he was still a child.

Ambition and personal point of view: Maguro’s very well aware that he acts rather flamboyant. But, much to everyone’s dismay, he can’t stop behaving the way he is. Despite acting confident, Maguro’s actually a fragile person. When set on a goal, Maguro’s quite determine to finish it, even if it took long hours non-stop working, he will make sure that he could make all of his goals and wishes come true.

Interaction with others: As stated above, Maguro gives people nicknames as a token of affection and friendship. Whether it was the people who he disliked or loved, he will always give them a nickname. With the exception of Ringo, of course. To most people he dislike, he would treat as trash and made sure they ( ... )

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Maguro App part.3 saffmk January 15 2010, 05:35:51 UTC
BackstoryFor all his life, Maguro lived in a fairly normal life. He had a loving family; hardworking father, a housewife mother and a sweet little sister, Salmon. The other residents of Suzuran respected them well as the Sasaki household respected them ( ... )

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Re: Maguro App part.4 saffmk January 15 2010, 05:37:08 UTC
What brings this person to Diamond City?:
Out of curiosity, Maguro decided to try and visit Primp. However, this backfired and instead, he arrived in Diamond City.

Special Abilities:
He can do magic! And not the usual crappy ‘pull the bunny out of the hat trick’ either!

He also has the ability to turn ten years younger or ten years older, he use this ability for his own advantages, they usually backfire one way or another though.

Misc. Notes:
[habits, likes, dislikes, canon jabs, appearance jabs, anything you wanna tell us that doesn't fit in the other areas.]
-If it isn’t obvious, his name means *pft* tuna.

-He tends to add a ~ in his sentences.

-His purple hair and sharp teeth are ~natural~ (hey, it appeared in his younger form didn’t it?)

-Screw yo-yos, Maguro’s all around skilled with his kendama. Which also explains why his spells are name after kendama moves.-No one actually knows what his eyes look like. Hell, not even Ringo ( ... )

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Re: Maguro App part.5 saffmk January 15 2010, 05:38:18 UTC
First-Person Sample: Thought Train:
Where is this place?

I wonder around the streets looking for answers. This place looks nothing like Primp, that’s all I knew. Hahaha, that obviously means I need to pay attention to Risepa’s explanation about those dimetions and distortions afterall.

Okay, that joke is getting a little old.

Ugh! One thing I know for sure, almost everyone’s clothes are out of style. But this place isn’t too bad, there’s a few good lookers here too. This might mean I could sell them some good threads or somethings, hahaha, that’s a good plan ( ... )

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Temp modly review woop woop buttcones_inc January 15 2010, 16:48:49 UTC
I think you've got a pretty great start! Your backstory's solid, you've got a great duo of samples for us, and other such things.

My only quips: I'd like for you to go in-depth some more on his special abilities. You mentioned that he bears magic, and also the ability to recess and progress in age. But... what other kinds of magic does he have? :O Explain that for me.

Personality is also a bit short to me, but I was able to grasp his personality anywho. Quality, not quantity anywho. That passes fine with me then, so we'll see how another mod thinks about it.

In short: More description of his magic abilities (anything you can think of, please!), and you'll have your first approval! You can do it!

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Re: Temp modly review woop woop saffmk January 16 2010, 18:09:16 UTC
Special Abilities:
He has the ability of magic *cue gay rainbows*. On general concept, his magic does not categorize as the generic style of elements, astronomy or any type of typical magic. His magic, however, could be categorize as chaotic or unpredictable magic as he rely on whether or not he makes a perfect kendama move or no. His ability to bear magic was caused by Ekoro, who, previously, posses Maguro in order to temporarily stop Ringo from ruining his fun. This also could explain why Maguro's magic is consider chaotic.

As most of the cast of PP7, he can recess and progress age. There's no simple explanation how they can do so. However, it's a common fact that Ekoro caused this as well as most incidents in PP7.

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1/2 approval buttcones_inc January 16 2010, 18:20:40 UTC
That sounds better to me! Approval number 1!

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Approval #2 lackinginbeef January 19 2010, 12:08:42 UTC
Sooooo sorry this took so long! I'm installing a new coffeemaker for the mod board ASAP!

Delicious coffeeeeee

Respond here with his journal, make your introduction, fetch the add/drop list and if you have any questions, my mobile AIM is "I aint yer buddy" :)

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Re: Approval #2 chaaansu January 19 2010, 13:19:59 UTC
Got it!

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