Re: Maguro App part.4saffmkJanuary 15 2010, 05:37:08 UTC
What brings this person to Diamond City?: Out of curiosity, Maguro decided to try and visit Primp. However, this backfired and instead, he arrived in Diamond City.
Special Abilities: He can do magic! And not the usual crappy ‘pull the bunny out of the hat trick’ either!
He also has the ability to turn ten years younger or ten years older, he use this ability for his own advantages, they usually backfire one way or another though.
Misc. Notes: [habits, likes, dislikes, canon jabs, appearance jabs, anything you wanna tell us that doesn't fit in the other areas.] -If it isn’t obvious, his name means *pft* tuna.
-He tends to add a ~ in his sentences.
-His purple hair and sharp teeth are ~natural~ (hey, it appeared in his younger form didn’t it?)
-No one actually knows what his eyes look like. Hell, not even Ringo.
-He’s a bi. He’s just in denial.
-He has a habit of saying ‘chance’, just listen to him at transformation and fever mode!
-He loves melon-pan.
-Unlike the fever cast, there’s no official birth-dates for PP7 characters. So to simplify things, Maguro’s birthday is 9th of June, since the numbers could be play on his name.
-He and Ringo are the best of friends. To the point that Ringo’s the only person who Maguro reffers by their real name instead of nicknames. Permissions: Later on.
Re: Maguro App part.5saffmkJanuary 15 2010, 05:38:18 UTC
First-Person Sample: Thought Train: Where is this place?
I wonder around the streets looking for answers. This place looks nothing like Primp, that’s all I knew. Hahaha, that obviously means I need to pay attention to Risepa’s explanation about those dimetions and distortions afterall.
Okay, that joke is getting a little old.
Ugh! One thing I know for sure, almost everyone’s clothes are out of style. But this place isn’t too bad, there’s a few good lookers here too. This might mean I could sell them some good threads or somethings, hahaha, that’s a good plan!
But first I think I need to attend school again. After all, this place might be like Suzuran, meaning I have to have some sort education to look good in my job application or portfolion.
...Man, even though Ringo-chan’s not here, I think I automatically force myself to think.
I guess that’s what happens when we hang out together since we’re tiny dots. Sheesh, I bet she’d have a fanfare or something if she ever founds out.
But back to busnis! I need to find some random high school then a fashion agency. Gyahahaha! This is truly a perfect plan! Third-Person Sample: At a huge city, faceless people are busy with one another’s personal active. Of course when you are on a look-out, you might notice a boy, no, a young man with toothy grin that resembles of a piranha’s, walking casually while looking around the buildings of the huge town.
This young man is none other than, Sasaki Maguro, eldest son of the Sasaki household and Suzuran’s neihgborhood fashionist. Of course, if he he was from another dimention, you might mistaken the Suzuran resident as someone else, like Porkey or Picky, but what seperates him from other people is his purple hair and, as mention before, his sharp animal like teeth.
This is very interesting
The city’s quite vast, he could look around for some time. Maybe he’s ready to move on to bigger places, who knows? For now he’ll just have to explore every inch of this city.
Hey! You just finished the app! Any last words? Reject me when you guys are ready. 8D
Temp modly review woop woopbuttcones_incJanuary 15 2010, 16:48:49 UTC
I think you've got a pretty great start! Your backstory's solid, you've got a great duo of samples for us, and other such things.
My only quips: I'd like for you to go in-depth some more on his special abilities. You mentioned that he bears magic, and also the ability to recess and progress in age. But... what other kinds of magic does he have? :O Explain that for me.
Personality is also a bit short to me, but I was able to grasp his personality anywho. Quality, not quantity anywho. That passes fine with me then, so we'll see how another mod thinks about it.
In short: More description of his magic abilities (anything you can think of, please!), and you'll have your first approval! You can do it!
Re: Temp modly review woop woopsaffmkJanuary 16 2010, 18:09:16 UTC
Special Abilities: He has the ability of magic *cue gay rainbows*. On general concept, his magic does not categorize as the generic style of elements, astronomy or any type of typical magic. His magic, however, could be categorize as chaotic or unpredictable magic as he rely on whether or not he makes a perfect kendama move or no. His ability to bear magic was caused by Ekoro, who, previously, posses Maguro in order to temporarily stop Ringo from ruining his fun. This also could explain why Maguro's magic is consider chaotic.
As most of the cast of PP7, he can recess and progress age. There's no simple explanation how they can do so. However, it's a common fact that Ekoro caused this as well as most incidents in PP7.
Out of curiosity, Maguro decided to try and visit Primp. However, this backfired and instead, he arrived in Diamond City.
Special Abilities:
He can do magic! And not the usual crappy ‘pull the bunny out of the hat trick’ either!
He also has the ability to turn ten years younger or ten years older, he use this ability for his own advantages, they usually backfire one way or another though.
Misc. Notes:
[habits, likes, dislikes, canon jabs, appearance jabs, anything you wanna tell us that doesn't fit in the other areas.]
-If it isn’t obvious, his name means *pft* tuna.
-He tends to add a ~ in his sentences.
-His purple hair and sharp teeth are ~natural~ (hey, it appeared in his younger form didn’t it?)
-Screw yo-yos, Maguro’s all around skilled with his kendama. Which also explains why his spells are name after kendama moves.
-No one actually knows what his eyes look like. Hell, not even Ringo.
-He’s a bi. He’s just in denial.
-He has a habit of saying ‘chance’, just listen to him at transformation and fever mode!
-He loves melon-pan.
-Unlike the fever cast, there’s no official birth-dates for PP7 characters. So to simplify things, Maguro’s birthday is 9th of June, since the numbers could be play on his name.
-He and Ringo are the best of friends. To the point that Ringo’s the only person who Maguro reffers by their real name instead of nicknames.
Permissions:
Later on.
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Where is this place?
I wonder around the streets looking for answers. This place looks nothing like Primp, that’s all I knew. Hahaha, that obviously means I need to pay attention to Risepa’s explanation about those dimetions and distortions afterall.
Okay, that joke is getting a little old.
Ugh! One thing I know for sure, almost everyone’s clothes are out of style. But this place isn’t too bad, there’s a few good lookers here too. This might mean I could sell them some good threads or somethings, hahaha, that’s a good plan!
But first I think I need to attend school again. After all, this place might be like Suzuran, meaning I have to have some sort education to look good in my job application or portfolion.
...Man, even though Ringo-chan’s not here, I think I automatically force myself to think.
I guess that’s what happens when we hang out together since we’re tiny dots. Sheesh, I bet she’d have a fanfare or something if she ever founds out.
But back to busnis! I need to find some random high school then a fashion agency. Gyahahaha! This is truly a perfect plan!
Third-Person Sample:
At a huge city, faceless people are busy with one another’s personal active. Of course when you are on a look-out, you might notice a boy, no, a young man with toothy grin that resembles of a piranha’s, walking casually while looking around the buildings of the huge town.
This young man is none other than, Sasaki Maguro, eldest son of the Sasaki household and Suzuran’s neihgborhood fashionist. Of course, if he he was from another dimention, you might mistaken the Suzuran resident as someone else, like Porkey or Picky, but what seperates him from other people is his purple hair and, as mention before, his sharp animal like teeth.
This is very interesting
The city’s quite vast, he could look around for some time. Maybe he’s ready to move on to bigger places, who knows? For now he’ll just have to explore every inch of this city.
Hey! You just finished the app! Any last words?
Reject me when you guys are ready. 8D
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My only quips: I'd like for you to go in-depth some more on his special abilities. You mentioned that he bears magic, and also the ability to recess and progress in age. But... what other kinds of magic does he have? :O Explain that for me.
Personality is also a bit short to me, but I was able to grasp his personality anywho. Quality, not quantity anywho. That passes fine with me then, so we'll see how another mod thinks about it.
In short: More description of his magic abilities (anything you can think of, please!), and you'll have your first approval! You can do it!
Reply
He has the ability of magic *cue gay rainbows*. On general concept, his magic does not categorize as the generic style of elements, astronomy or any type of typical magic. His magic, however, could be categorize as chaotic or unpredictable magic as he rely on whether or not he makes a perfect kendama move or no. His ability to bear magic was caused by Ekoro, who, previously, posses Maguro in order to temporarily stop Ringo from ruining his fun. This also could explain why Maguro's magic is consider chaotic.
As most of the cast of PP7, he can recess and progress age. There's no simple explanation how they can do so. However, it's a common fact that Ekoro caused this as well as most incidents in PP7.
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